After I Became the Heroine's Master

It's so wonderful. This novel is mainly about development. The heroine's character is well shaped in the early stage and changes quickly in the later stage. It's just that there are too many interactions between the hero and the female counterpart. I suggest the author change this aspect. The plot is still very good.

I think it's very interesting, the plot is very interesting, the male protagonist's emotional line is very delicate, and the characters are well portrayed. The author must be a thoughtful person. This book makes me feel like it was written by a female writer, because it is really delicate [laughing] and the author is super active. He will basically reply to your comments, so keep going [sending my heart] Moreover, the author's writing style is also very good, describing various environments and describing the details very well. It can be seen that the author has excellent writing skills [blowing kiss] [laughing evilly]

It's rare to see a novel on Tomato that allows me to calm down and read word for word. Five-star praise Women are strong while men are weak. The male protagonist has a high level of cultivation but is a little weak due to his furnace constitution. In this aspect, the female protagonist is stronger and possessive. There are no stomach-ache-inducing conflicts or misunderstandings between master and disciple. On the contrary, it has always been a sweet relationship, with no big deal. The plot is tight and well-written. Mu Wanwan is my favorite cute little girl. The characters in the book are all pretty good and there are no weird points. All in all, this book is quite good to read, but the rating is a bit low. If you can read it, you will be like me, feeling that it has been a long time since I found a master-disciple book that suits my taste.

The role of the male protagonist is not very good, and I don't say that he is too soft. I can only say that he is not tough enough. He has always felt like an honest person begging for help. I still like the strong male and female characters (personal opinion, not related to this book). In addition, the female protagonist's name is a bit neutral, and both of them are a bit unsuitable. Overall, it is okay. I will give it a four-star support.

The heroine's name is Gu Yan? Why does it sound like a male name? The male protagonist's name is Mu Xiaobai? A bit like a girl's name

Why does it look like a female video?

More than 1,000 photos. In the past year [face covering], I roughly understand the plot. Because the male protagonist has a missing soul, he has become... A person with a defective IQ... Bai Tian, the reborn heroine's slow daily guide [smirking] gave me this feeling. I said more than 1,000 pages, not more than 1,000 chapters [makes a face] Don't get it wrong [sends heart]

There is a single female protagonist, master and apprentice, the male protagonist travels through the book, and the female protagonist is reborn. I've read about 30 chapters so far. It's very well written, but my score is definitely low. Come and help replenish blood As long as the follow-up is not toxic and written steadily, it will be a good article. Come on, author It's very sweet. The heroine develops into a yandere and is very proactive. The article is very smooth!

Not bad, worth 5⭐, keep up the good work.

The writing is very good and the writing style is good but why is the rating so low [Thinking]