Oh No, I've Become the White Moonlight

Hello everyone, this is a newbie Xiaopoujie. After thinking about it again and again, I decided to post a long comment to talk about something: 1. This is a child's first book in the true sense, so the arrangement and processing of the plot in the early stage may not be so smooth, or even dragging. Friends who really mind can skip reading. If you have time and energy, it will be changed later... We also welcome your opinions. In the early stages of the campus chapter, there was relatively little physical contact between the male and female protagonists. At this time, the male protagonist had no intention of accepting the female protagonist, and was even deliberately alienating her. So I can only rely on some very zz villains to promote the plot, well... There is no way, the author is too bad. It will be better later on when the male and female protagonists start to interact with each other. 2. My heroine is silly and sweet. If I wanted to write about strong women, I would write about female videos. I just like cute girls who are stupid and easy to fool. O(`ω´*)o And the introduction also said that she has no common sense and would mind if the heroine is occasionally stupid in some trivial things... I'm sorry, I can't change this. I can only go out and turn left. 3. Children like digging holes and boomerangs, but theoretically speaking, they will be filled in later. Whenever they see something that is very abrupt and unreasonable at first glance (such as the Yang difference and no salary, or the male protagonist is willing to work for nothing without being paid), those are the holes dug by the author, which will be filled in later! So please don't blame me for my foreshadowing! Anyway, writing is not a process of constantly digging holes and filling them in... Ahem (more below)

As an idealist, I had some opinions on some of the plots, but I saw one of them: People who truly appreciate you will fall in love with you again and again, regardless of a memory. I finally felt relieved... This book by the author can be regarded as the end of my regrets. I give it five-star praise with both hands 🥺 🥺 🥺

The plot is good, at least I like it. If the introduction can be improved, it may be more attractive to readers. For example, it can be shown that it has extraordinary powers at the beginning, so it will not be so disconnected. After all, I almost didn't read the book at the beginning because the first half of the introduction sounded like a romance novel, and the second half sounded like a fantasy. Personal opinion, for reference only🙂🙂🙂

Very good! The author has his own style, and he listens to advice and immediately corrects the problems and poisonous points pointed out by others. The writing style is relaxed and natural, and the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also well written. Give it a five-star support. Finally, please update, it's not enough!

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it? How about the author recommend the book?

The author's writing is pretty good, but I don't know why it's not popular.

It feels like a fire will pierce your eyes [note]

It's very sweet, super sweet. Based on my 3 years of reading experience with single female protagonists, this is considered good food. Then I don't want the following plot to be cliche, with the heroine being kidnapped and the heroine having a mysterious background. I just want to watch daily sweet love, and everything else can be put aside

Not buddy [what][what][what][what][what] I was watching enthusiastically [rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes] You can't tell me anymore 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

Real love combined with fantasy (or urban imagination), the subject matter is very interesting and there are no messy other emotional lines. The men and women are a good match. The reading is smooth, and the description of the details of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very poignant. I really like this book, good luck to the author!