I Became a Bratty Little Demon, and the Heroine Is Devoted to Me!

Author, I will give you some time to think about it. Now you just need to write slowly and slowly, and sooner or later you will become one of those platinum masters. Don't be too far-sighted, but start from the basics. As long as this book is written seriously, becoming a god will not be a dream in the future.

It's okay, it suits my taste [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] I just hope that when I chase my wife, it won't be too miserable, otherwise my stomach will start to hurt again [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

Belongs to a sweet article with sincere and delicate emotions (As far as I've read the first dozen chapters) What happened during the time-travel at the beginning (including the transitional period during the time-travel) was a bit abrupt and was not explained clearly, and the person who was taken away was not clear either (although it was secondary, it seemed that there were a few passages [thinking]) Then the scene of changing clothes seems a bit fast and calling "Master" (perhaps it can be done step by step, but the straight shot is also a highlight, but it lacks the feeling [full]) The description of the appearance of the two heroines (especially the one facing Xia in the front) is a bit lacking, and the facial expressions and psychology are vividly portrayed. This is the highlight of the author's style [Send Heart] Month: Shy little lolita easily Xia: Brave and resourceful Lolicon The interaction between the two is very exciting and fits the scope of this type of novel, even more so. Well, I came here from the author's "dual personality novel", so I feel that the author has made great progress in writing. From the beginning, he was not very proficient (at least it has surpassed the initial stage of many writers) to now, the ups and downs are orderly, the plot is fascinating, the emotions are portrayed in subtle ways, the details are rich, and some "fuck" words are gone [laughing] I hope that the author will one day become a major novelist and be at the forefront of novels with this theme. There will be a novel with a score of 9 or above (scores really don't mean anything. After reading Tomato for so long, I can only say that most of the high scores are good and the low scores are not too low. There are also many that are excellent and have not been discovered. Or maybe the readers who were discovered have a bright spot in this regard and happen to dislike some plots in the book) Okay, author, please go and update [Thinking] This is the point

It looks good, but in fact, the protagonist died when he was sleeping in the maid's room. The rest are all fantasies before death [laughter] and the crematorium and other things in the back are all the protagonist's self-comfort [laughter]

It's also super good-looking. What's more important is that the author is good-looking and very supportive. It's very, very good.

Difficult to comment. There is always a feeling that everyone (including the system) is "bullying" the heroine

Overall, it's a good watch, and the plot is also good. The protagonist travels through time and becomes a stupid lolita, and also becomes the maid of the wealthy lady [Sending Hearts] Trash fish! Faith ball! [Rolls eyes] Huh? Turns out to be a lolicon! [Shock]

Five stars first, cheers for the author. I will add more comments later

Hehehehe~ It's very beautiful. A miscellaneous author can actually write such a good-looking novel. Oops~ I really underestimated it. Let's give it a five-star reward. Hehehe ∽ [making a face]

It was ok but it was done too fast