Transmigrated Into a Male-Oriented Novel? I’ll Ascend First

It's very interesting. It writes a lot about the male protagonist's peeing and the heroine's views on male and female marriage. The third brother doesn't talk about ten years in Hedong and ten years in Hexi like the male novel. Don't bully young people into poverty. Generally speaking, it is very interesting. The author should send more [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses]

The author writes very well, and I give it five stars because it has surpassed 80% of the female immortal novels in all aspects. The female protagonist will not be too soft-hearted and puts herself first. I temporarily stopped at chapter 38 because I have actually read a lot of male videos, and I am used to the protagonist's character design. The female protagonist has made great progress, but for me, it seems a bit too moral and aggrieved. Some plots are a bit inconsistent. The heroine keeps explaining why she wants to save people. There is really no need to explain. Over-explanation is the behavior of a weak person seeking recognition. Of course, the author may have his own market considerations, best wishes

Hi, originally because the author's character of the protagonist was too contradictory and too morally arrogant, I wanted to give it a three-star rating and forget it. However, because the author's ideological core still has some shining points that I like. For example, the love for girls may be a bit contradictory, but overall I still love girls. The natural gender tendency made me stay. Then as I continued reading, I was humored to the point where it was upgraded to four stars. Maybe I am more emotionally happy. After all, reading novels is just for leisure and entertainment. Attached is the part that made me laugh: "Such a good seedling! Such excellent mental control, my God! Why isn't she a fire spirit? Oh my god! Damn it, the formation mages earn less and work hard and are tired. How lucky are they to have such a good seedling! Why! Why! Why can't the alchemist meet such a good seedling!", I simply sympathize with the complaints about making less work and being tired. The book is not very good, but it is not particularly bad. The author may be in the awakening period of women's thoughts, or in the transitional period, and he wants to criticize the false love, discrimination, and devaluation of women in male and female videos. This part is there, and it is good, but at the same time, the details are not handled well. For example, at the beginning, the part about the brother's breakup of engagement and the family relationship was a bit stuck. Nothing was said and nothing was done. However, it got stuck at the key point, nothing was done, and action was taken after the fact. The subsequent description of the protagonist's morality is too exaggerated in many places, and the heroine is put too high. In fact, if it is the protagonist's own thinking that is a fierce struggle, then those struggles should be hidden in the text, rather than explained in words. Additional explanations will give a sense of fragmentation, which is actually a sign of insufficient writing power. Come on, I hope it will become smoother as I write. I am still looking forward to the direction of the world shown in the introduction of this book.

Not bad! Still being serialized! I feel that everyone's opinions are quite pertinent. It would be better if the author could have time to go back and revise some of the previous articles. Overall, there are no flaws in the writing style, and the perspective is relatively fresh, but I always feel it's a bit lacking. Please give the author a big boost! The author is great... I am waiting for you to come back (waiting unswervingly (not in a hurry) (I can still live for many years) Editor 2: How should I put it? The more I read, the more I feel that many of the low scores in the comment section are because they have read too many fast food novels. The author spends a lot of pen and ink to describe and portray the character's heart, which makes Qianxue's character more three-dimensional. People will think and struggle. Nothing is absolute. There is no absolute good and evil in the world, and there is no absolute family affection and reason. This is consistent with a person, a living person. The author portrays Qianxue really well, a girl who comes to a different world but does not forget modern education, a girl who is really working hard but is also simple and ordinary. To be honest, if you really like watching mindless movies, you might as well go out and turn right.

The plot is great, but what attracts me more than the plot is the character of the protagonist. The protagonist does not agree with the saying that "girls should be rich and boys should be poor." Girls can also grow through setbacks; the protagonist firmly believes that "family members can rely on themselves, but they will not rely on them." He always holds the initiative of his destiny in his own hands and strives to Try to improve your strength instead of placing your hopes on your brother Long Aotian; when you encounter unfair treatment in the clan, you will not tolerate it again and again, but rely on your talent and status to directly ask for it in public, even if you don't need it now, you still have to get what you deserve. I really like this type of heroine, keep up the good work

It's nice to watch, and the heroine has delicate emotions. When the worldviews of the two worlds collide, she will make less than correct decisions, but that's okay. She was just an ordinary person before the time travel, and after the time travel, she only awakened memories after a certain age. She is not an AI that can think like a program. She only cares about gains and losses and does not care about emotions. She is a living, flesh-and-blood person. At the age of 12, when she is full of dreams and has such a sense of justice, she is as energetic as the sun at eight or nine o'clock. She doesn't want to just indulge in the dark world, and she doesn't have so much energy to light up the world. I am looking forward to the story behind it^ω^

It's really good. It's my first book review since reading Tomato. Although it's not finished yet. But the growth path of the baby girl is really interesting. Those who watched it in the middle of the night felt warm [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. The most important thing is! It's so exciting. I read novels on the Internet just for the pleasure. If I want to torture, I can only torture men! ! ? So cool! ! And it's not mindless, it's simply more enjoyable! ! ! !

It is a relatively new novel, with a feeling of cultivating immortals in continental Europe. The heroine has a very good character. She works hard in cultivation and uses resources when needed. I really like the character of the heroine. It's just that this fiancé hasn't appeared yet, and I don't know why I don't want them to be together hahahahaha. Let's wait for the author to follow up on the article's direction later.

The article is quite good, but it is too didactic. Even if I agree with the author's point of view, it still affects the perception. Writing is about exporting opinions. Of course, it is normal to be biased, but it is fine to tell the story in the novel, and it is OK to imply praise and criticism, but don't go out of your way to convince the readers in the plot like a debate.

Everyone's image is so full. My father is not a real feudal patriarch. He cares about his children very much. He thinks he can't take care of the baby and cries secretly at night. Brother, he is not the kind of stinking and arrogant man like "Long Aotian" on the male channel. He is too cute to argue with his sister. I'm embarrassed to say that I care, but he saves money to buy gifts for his sister. He collects "goldfinger" wool to give his sister elixirs. Our sister is the cutest and most adorable. A very self-reliant baby who is not shy about expressing love. She can speak her thoughts directly to her father and brother. She also has a mushroom head. She feels like a very cool girl. She is also very decisive and takes action when necessary. It's so cool to kill the long-tongued man in the family! ! Not enough to watch!