The Order Official

The score is open, give yourself a five-star rating, write slowly, take your time, and hope to make more progress.

This book is well written, and the overall purpose is to serve the plot, rather than singling out a single person. The emotional lines in this book are not so single, and are limited to love. It contains the righteousness of family and country, the emotions of brothers and sisters, and the emotion of protecting others. The one you protect is not necessarily your lover. What's more, that person may represent the time we once had. The heroine is also a very strong and charming person. She is tenacious, has superb archery skills and martial arts. She also has a very positive outlook on life. When faced with the weak, she will help when she needs it. Her character has not collapsed, and she also cherishes the sincerity of others towards her. The description of the heroine will not focus on her appearance, but will show her personal charm by describing what she does, without being secular. The little characters in the book also have their highlights, and the author will not kill a little character's life at will. Those people are flesh and blood, not just tools. Every character, whether it is the so-called enemy Balur, will also have his own personal emotions. It is not said that his emotional portrayal is not ignored just because he is the enemy of the protagonist. Finally, although it is not finished yet, I am very grateful to the author for creating Yu Shiyi and this book. Happy New Year!

I have read the author's first and second books and am now reading the third. It can be seen with the naked eye that the author's writing is getting better and better, and the plot is getting better and better. The author has always been good at writing group portrait novels, and after reading each one, I am deeply impressed by the supporting characters in the novel. This book adds a more complex historical background and deeper feelings about family and country, and the supporting characters are more vivid. Compared with the previous "A Little Book Temple in Chang'an" and "Du Qinggu", the emotional line has been significantly reduced. The plot is very exciting and suitable for serious reading. It is recommended that the power struggle in the court can be added in the later stage. In short, it is worth watching.

This book is plot-oriented, which is what novels written many years ago were like. This is a rare author of an old variety. Today's young people read love and ignore the plot. Romance online articles have the benefit of quick monetization, so many young writers are accustomed to fast pace, simple plot, high excitement, sweetness or cruelty. However, there are fewer and fewer good works. The ideas and writing methods of the author of this article require certain literary literacy, rich social experience, and good Chinese language skills, which younger writers cannot write. When I see Ma Boyong's novels, I always regret that there are so few classics like this on female channels, because male channels focus on the logic of the storyline and improve the characters of the protagonists and supporting characters. Only such books can be timeless and classics. Female channels should publish more works like this book and encourage more writers to settle down first. When writing ancient poems, you must first visit the museum and read the literature and history books before writing. Don't substitute the requirements of modern people for hundreds of years ago. When writing about bosses, at least read through fashion magazines and learn about the lives of rich people before writing. Don't write about "He took me to Meters...". I didn't expect that Tomato could have such a good author. Give it a five-star review first so that more people can see it. When we meet a good author, the way we encourage her is to sponsor her. If you don't have money, it doesn't matter. Everyone can have the opportunity to see advertising support three times a day, so that people who can write can write better works as a career.

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I'll rate it early this time, so as not to delay it until the end and I won't want to write anymore. [Note] Although the new story has only been open for three days, and the events, clues, and character pasts have not been revealed, but from the description of Yu Shiyi and Qi Yanzhen in the introduction, I can already predict the abuse of "The Commander". In troubled times in China, the tension between the hatred of enemies and the love between children must be heartbreaking. The difference in personality makes them hurt each other in the process of falling in love. The protagonist of Mumu not only suffers in life, but also experiences the pain of love🥲I never like to read sad stories. I watched "Fuqinggu" with pain and joy. Now I am ready, just abuse it, I believe Mumu will make the protagonists HE [Send Heart]

15 Years old, this book is really a high-quality article that is rare in Tomato. I can't bear to see the pearl covered in dust, and I wrote these words late at night. The most touching thing about "The Order" is that in troubled times, all living beings suffer. Yu Shiyi is burdened with a blood feud, but is not only trapped in personal hatred; Qi Yanzhen is trapped in the status of a proton and walks on thin ice. The male and female protagonists are both rivals and co-conspirators. Their sincerity is hidden under heavy suspicions, and they are pulled and forbeared. They are restrained to the extreme. There are no sudden heartbeats, no grand confessions, and no bloody scenes of giving up home and country for each other. The pull between the two is restrained and painful, and reason always overpowers lust. This is the equal match of adults. The most important thing is that there are no paper figures in the book. Every supporting character has a complete motivation and arc. The image is three-dimensional and full, and the story and character make people cry. Every woman in the book is a brave, resourceful, affectionate and righteous person. The author has given each female treasure a different highlight. There is no place in the whole text that is limited to female competition and love. Everyone has the feelings of family and country in their hearts. The plot and logic of the whole text are online, without suspension or force. Love is just a corner in the cracks of troubled times. The righteousness of family and country and the struggle for survival are the background.

It's a tie, it's very well written, the plot and writing are all very good, and the author is great. The group portraits are also very interesting. The only uncomfortable thing is that every time I see Tianxiang and Xin Sanniang commit themselves to others, I feel very uncomfortable and aggrieved. Although it fits the background of troubled times, these points are quite sad. Including the male protagonist's appearance and his men running down and killing people on the street, it can actually be seen that they are not good people. I like the heroine very much, but the power of a person is too limited, and there is no aura of the heroine. The heroine's strength is very strong, but she is still controlled by others. But I really like the heroine's character. I don't know if there will be more abuse in the future. In fact, I don't like to look at reality. But good writing like this is so hard to find. Also, the slow-warm emotional lines are good, I like slow-warm ones.

I like to read this kind of long and powerful plot, and now it's over 600,000 words, which is not enough for me. I feel that the end of the Gilded Banquet is the first chapter, and now it's the second chapter, and the changing power struggle in it is slowly revealed. The plot is very good, everyone has their own mission, and the characterization is also great. I like the heroine Eleven very much! It's so interesting. I'm already fascinated by her. She is brave, resourceful, affectionate and interesting.

Tomato rarely has a pure ancient style, and there are no golden fingers like time travel and rebirth. The author's writing style is really good, and the plot is also very attractive. But I am too tired to follow the updates, so I will read it again after reading it for a while. The rating of 7.7 Is too low and does not deserve this article. The author's writing style and compositional ingenuity deserve more than 9.5 Points.