After I Was Forced to Succeed at the Capture Target

I will keep chasing, it's really heart-wrenching, this is what I can understand about the heartthrob. It seems that he has conquered everyone, but it is actually the result of repeated trials and errors of death and reincarnation. Of course, those targets are good and bad. Chen Yao is really an irreplaceable safe haven for them all, although the nature is yet to be determined.

The subject matter of this article is very novel and really top-notch, but it also has some shortcomings, such as too few. Author, do you dare to finish it all at once and scare me [note] The writing is very good, but some details still need to be polished. For example, on Jiang Ru's planet, why doesn't Chen go with him? His parents are already there, so one more person doesn't really matter. The second is the character. This is really well written and very personal. However, the overall style of the article is rather dark and depressing. It makes my cheeks hurt when I read it, but it is not abusive. It is easy to skip some important plots at a glance, so you need to figure it out slowly. Come on author, it's great

I really experienced the feeling of white moonlight, which seems to be a kind of salvation for everyone. The writing is delicate and true, allowing me to forgive the world for three seconds [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

Come on, author, write the main attack quickly, right? I really want to watch it. Lin Manyue and Shen hope it will be offline soon. . . . I don't want to see them by nature. What a miserable experience. Who hasn't had such a miserable experience?

The description of feelings is very delicate, and it is not like ordinary strategy articles. It is more distressing - every time I come back and every time I miss Chen Yao

I really like this setting where I will fall in love with you no matter how many times I come back... It's hard not to love this feeling of being preferred... Please, it must be he in the end! Come on, author-san! Calling you! 😇

It's great to watch, but the male protagonist doesn't have many roles. I actually really want to watch Shura Field. With the five of them standing together, I feel like Xiaoyao is really partial to the protagonist.

1. Framework: So far, the story ideas are very novel and unconventional. 2. Logic and characterization: The author did not elaborate on the emotional description between the protagonist and the male supporting character due to setting reasons, but he also explained the basic setting and logic. The logic can basically withstand scrutiny. In the process of unfolding the strategy of the previous N life, the different personalities and personalities of several male supporting characters and the male protagonist were reflected. In particular, the character of the male protagonist is clearly written in one chapter of the confession, and the changes in the main protagonist's mental journey are very natural and well-shaped. 3. Rhythm: From the beginning to the latest chapter of more than 80 chapters, the rhythm setting is very tight and interlocking, without any delay, and directly unfolds the core conflict. 4. Plot advancement: The plot and conflicts are not deliberately advanced. Although the setting of "coincidence" is used to promote it, at least it has turned a corner. For example, it is a coincidence that the protagonist's drop of blood is in the same spaceship as Shen, but Shen cannot find it directly, so he can only entrust a detective and find others to confirm it through the memories of his past life, so that the bloody feeling is not so strong. Parents don't play a big role in promoting the plot. I feel there is room for adjustment in this part. All in all, it's worth a read. Personally, I would rate it 4.5 Points. The remaining 0.5 Points would be given to the author for great encouragement and flowers.

I've watched it so far and it's really good-looking, but there are some places where it looks uncomfortable. Jiang's emotions are very contradictory, and the emotions of the other protagonists are also very contradictory. I feel that Jiang really looks like a scumbag, but I can barely understand it. Let me first talk about the points that make me feel uncomfortable. All the following are my personal opinions. Please don't scold me🙏 1. The other targets created by the author are actually quite good. That prince whose name is that and that Shan Chu deserve a good ending (for now), but what Lin says doesn't matter anymore, he has a bit of m tendency, and he also likes to be ignored? . Then Shen's words seem quite contradictory at present. 2. Jiang actually looks like a scumbag This article is also very good, and the description of emotions is quite delicate. For me, who is short of reading, it is very good, but the author has made the characters a little bit good or bad. It is still being serialized, so I don't think so much about it. It's really good. Come on, please do it. It looks good, so I've blamed the system for everything [OK]

It's really pretty, to be honest. It's just a little too short and the ending is rushed. Babies who like to watch Shura Field can take a look. The two-way redemption between Yiyi and Xiao Yue is the ending of he. No matter what you do, I will always support you, no matter what you do, I will always be behind you. If you do it boldly, I will always be behind you. Even if I am not your choice, even if you have no choice but to turn to others and conquer others, Yiyi, although I am one of your attackers, I will never give you a headache or make you worry about you. What Xiao Yue wanted was never false intimacy. He watered the barren land with tenderness and paved the layers of fallen leaves with sincerity. But under the fallen leaves, there was sincerity hidden, and the love that broke out of the ground penetrated his heart. Unfortunately for him, he could only wait behind Yiyi and look at his back. He was lucky again, he waited, waited for that sincerity. I am very satisfied with the plot concept and the characters are relatively fleshed out. However, Xiao Yue's number of appearances is still a bit low. Most of the first half is about recalling what happened in countless reincarnations in the past and their emotional entanglements. The writing is still a bit naive and misses the key characters. The last last. Yiyi and Xiaoyue must be together forever! ! !