Unpacking Parcels in the Heaven Sword World, Living It Up in Style

No, brother, everything is fine in the front, but why does so-and-so appear in the back with the face of an actor? I don't think those actors are very beautiful. You might as well leave the readers some room for imagination as described in the original book.

I finished reading it and it was quite interesting, but I didn't like it very much when Naruto came out. It was a bunch of martial arts worlds and suddenly an anime was created. The twist was too big. Also, the romance with Xiao Longnu took a long time to write, but the writing was okay. It didn't involve licking people. It gave emotions and knew how to pull, instead of giving blindly. This is great. Except for Xiao Longnu, there is no ambiguity among the others, she is not a eunuch, and she does not act as a nanny for the protagonist in the book. These are all plus points. The harem contains quite a lot of money, and there is no romantic drama. It is very direct and realistic. At the same time, the male protagonist is always strong and can hold it down, which is very enjoyable to watch. It just sucks from there, but it's okay. After all, I have something to do at home, so I can't force it. Come on.

The writing is okay, and although the writing style is not that sophisticated, it is completely in line with the reading experience of today's young people. However, a book cannot satisfy everyone's appetite, just like a person who can't eat spicy food can still say that it tastes really delicious after being fed a mouthful of Lao Ganma. I hope the author has a good attitude. As for the issue of the harem, I only express my personal opinion and have a certain degree of control. This degree is whether you, the author, like the female character, or whether you like the character suggested by the reader and whether you can accept it. If you like it, the harem in my book will definitely not treat the female character as a marginal role. With the method of immortality later, the harem will become a support for the male protagonist. If you don't like her yourself, then you become a stamp collector. She is just beautiful, and I just want to crush her under me, this kind of dough-sculpting bulldozer. Of course, there is a market for this kind of books, but they are all one-off and can be read over and over again. Some people even skip reading just to finish it in one go. We write books just to make money, and we want to keep it flowing. If you practice your writing and details in this novel, your next novel will attract more people. If it's for hobby, then let's just do whatever we want and write according to our own inner thoughts. This only represents my personal opinion. Come on, author.

After gradually getting better and becoming relatively invincible and immortal through the system and your own efforts, you can go to various worlds and do what you want to do, whether the plot revolves around various girls or you can change the plot to suit your own wishes. It doesn't matter. Good

I have been reading books for many years, and my personal opinion on time travel skills is that without skills, you are just an ordinary person. Although you have knowledge of science and technology, you really can't defeat ancient people with family background, let alone the protagonist of luck😁Storage space skills come first, displacement (light skills) is best and flash skills can save lives, martial arts It can strengthen the body (can withstand beatings), and finally internal strength. Regarding the meaning of life after time travel, play the world and save the world. Don't try to change the world (look at the white hats in the Middle East). Everything is the result of their choices. In the feudal dynasty, anyone can be the emperor. Let alone Li Er, Zhu Chongba is indispensable.

It looks good. If you like it, please buy more! This is really fast-paced, and the fighting power does not overwhelm the protagonist. I haven't seen such an enjoyable book in a long time. The protagonist has a low moral bottom line and is not aggrieved. Five-star praise! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

I've finished reading it and am waiting for the update. I feel like the rating shouldn't be so low. Author, I have a guess. Did you post your novel to Space or Moments? I advise you not to do this. There will really be many people who will make malicious negative comments [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The main plot remains the same, but there is a story of growth and change. It's so well written! This is a satiating book. I didn't want to comment on it at first, but I've been reading too many useless books recently and it's made me feel numb. I hope this book can be read by fellow book lovers and help each other! If you have a good book, remember to leave a comment!

Such a wonderful and refreshing article about Zhutianhougong, of course deserves five stars.

Why is the score so low [laughing awkwardly] This is a really cool novel [laughing evilly]