Traveling through the heavens + cultivating to become an immortal + small world + multiple female protagonists + no system + becoming an immortal with beauty
The protagonist is transported away by a large ship, and a world bead takes him to other worlds, and he embarks on a journey through time.
First, he gained telekinesis by losing control of his super power, then started the path of cultivation in the Eight Parts of Tianlong, and then evolved into the small world of the Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty.
In the end, relying on the power of each world and the support of the world behind him, he embarked on the transcendent road of becoming an immortal.
Note: The author is a newbie, so I hope everyone can understand me, tell me the good and bad, and I will correct it.
Finally, I would like to ask for your attention and some positive comments. Thank you all.
Reader comments
So far it seems to be okay, the plot progresses quickly without too much nonsense. There are some minor problems. First, some of the plots or what the characters say are unreasonable or illogical. Second, the plot is a bit mechanical and lacks flexibility.
It's too watery. I've learned the martial arts over and over again. The side dishes are treated as the main course, but the main course can't be seen clearly. You are an astronomer, you need to understand this.
It's bland and tasteless, and the characters' actions and dialogue descriptions are mechanical and stiff, giving people the impression of a strong AI flavor.
It's okay, I can watch it. It's just that the protagonist doesn't act as if he's not a time traveler, he doesn't seem to know the plot, he's dumb and drunk, it's not like he's pretending to be stupid, he's pure stupidity, the author should pay attention to it later when shaping the image and plot. 150,000 Words punch in
I won't say anything else. Take all the women away. I won't tell you. You can also bring the men into the space.
I used to like reading Astronomy when I was still studying. I miss it very much [Learned]
It seems to be okay for now, I can look forward to it later.
It's ok, add a bookshelf and have a look
Super nice novel
I think the small world and Tianlong are all acceptable, but why do we still go to the Sui and Tang Dynasties in the third world? Go higher.
In the harem story, you meet one after another, bring a lot of people into the small world with you, and follow them through the world, making a mark. . . .
Nice, but too little
Missing Zhong Ling and Li Canghai
If you read enough books, you just need to keep reading.
So far it seems to be okay, the plot progresses quickly without too much nonsense. There are some minor problems. First, some of the plots or what the characters say are unreasonable or illogical. Second, the plot is a bit mechanical and lacks flexibility. It's too watery. I've learned the martial arts over and over again. The side dishes are treated as the main course, but the main course can't be seen clearly. You are an astronomer, you need to understand this. It's bland and tasteless, and the characters' actions and dialogue descriptions are mechanical and stiff, giving people the impression of a strong AI flavor.
It's okay, I can watch it. It's just that the protagonist doesn't act as if he's not a time traveler, he doesn't seem to know the plot, he's dumb and drunk, it's not like he's pretending to be stupid, he's pure stupidity, the author should pay attention to it later when shaping the image and plot. 150,000 Words punch in
I won't say anything else. Take all the women away. I won't tell you. You can also bring the men into the space.
I used to like reading Astronomy when I was still studying. I miss it very much [Learned]
It seems to be okay for now, I can look forward to it later.
It's ok, add a bookshelf and have a look
Super nice novel
I think the small world and Tianlong are all acceptable, but why do we still go to the Sui and Tang Dynasties in the third world? Go higher.
In the harem story, you meet one after another, bring a lot of people into the small world with you, and follow them through the world, making a mark. . . .
Nice, but too little
Missing Zhong Ling and Li Canghai
If you read enough books, you just need to keep reading.
Very beautiful, very exciting.
. Update quickly, update quickly.