My Journey Through the Heavens

So far it seems to be okay, the plot progresses quickly without too much nonsense. There are some minor problems. First, some of the plots or what the characters say are unreasonable or illogical. Second, the plot is a bit mechanical and lacks flexibility. It's too watery. I've learned the martial arts over and over again. The side dishes are treated as the main course, but the main course can't be seen clearly. You are an astronomer, you need to understand this. It's bland and tasteless, and the characters' actions and dialogue descriptions are mechanical and stiff, giving people the impression of a strong AI flavor.

It's okay, I can watch it. It's just that the protagonist doesn't act as if he's not a time traveler, he doesn't seem to know the plot, he's dumb and drunk, it's not like he's pretending to be stupid, he's pure stupidity, the author should pay attention to it later when shaping the image and plot. 150,000 Words punch in

I won't say anything else. Take all the women away. I won't tell you. You can also bring the men into the space.

I used to like reading Astronomy when I was still studying. I miss it very much [Learned]

It seems to be okay for now, I can look forward to it later.

In the harem story, you meet one after another, bring a lot of people into the small world with you, and follow them through the world, making a mark. . . .

Nice, but too little

I think the small world and Tianlong are all acceptable, but why do we still go to the Sui and Tang Dynasties in the third world? Go higher.

Super nice novel

It's ok, add a bookshelf and have a look