Online Gaming in the Land of Light: I'm the Only One Who Knows the Entire Storyline

(Up and down) Purple•Legend (Level 15)/8.5 Points+ Sense of substitution B, plug-in B, setting S, writing style A, rhythm A, imagination B, character design B, main line B, logic A. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Innovative Otwen, the overall feeling of Otwen is correct, the logic is self-consistent, the details are up to standard, and it is creative (+1 level). Looking at the subsequent increase in ratings, I have seen a similar article, but it was about Dragon Ball, and it ended in a rush. I forgot what it was called. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition (1) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (2) Recommendation grade evaluation process: ① Score according to the following (3), (4), and (5), and use (6) to make corrections. ② Calculate the total score according to (1). ③Refer to the level of the work, use additional deduction points to make corrections, and finally arrive at the evaluation. (3-1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C (3-2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C (4-1) Difficulty bonus: Rhythm A, Imagination A, Main Line B (4-2) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A (5-1) Theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S (5-2) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S (6) Creative bonus... 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: World background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (9) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points (6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points; (7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points. (8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (11) Inferior (female channel mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. 4. Evaluation template (1) Operation process: ① Take a screenshot, ② Recognize the picture, ③ Select the recognized location, ④ Copy to the clipboard, ⑤ Paste the comment. (2) Evaluation template (Bottom two) White + Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points Sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings, writing, rhythm, imagination, characters, main line, logic. Additional deductions: Personal feelings: (3) Remarks ①The character limit for Tomato comments is 150 ②Copy (2) evaluation template, template characters 62/150 ——Evaluation of "Seventh Edition Revised", 1,700 words+

It's okay. I'm not used to seeing an original heroine. When I read a novel and saw an original heroine added inexplicably, I couldn't stand it. The writing is pretty good.

I think the author can add a form novel to Tiga (this can be written as a mysterious transformation caused by receiving a powerful light power in a certain copy), and then change Noah into two forms from a super galactic legend that appeared in Nexus (that is, winged Noah and wingless Noah), and then the BOOS in the scrapped case can also be added, such as Dark Lucifer. This can be written as a hidden copy of Noah's world, a mysterious mission triggered by a certain operation of the protagonist. (The reward is Lucifer's form) Then in the later stage, the protagonist can understand the nature of light and darkness and merge all his forms together to create his own body.

This book already has a time traveler (protagonist), a reborn person (should be darkened), and a dragon king (not exactly, it's better to say it this way) (currently he will not be on the opposite side of the protagonist) The heroines, Carmilla and Carmilla (currently and probably will not change in the future) It's a little bit poisonous, but most people should be able to accept it. The writing is very good (self-evaluation). It is recommended not to bury too many holes. It will take time to explain later and throw out new settings. Or explain it as soon as possible. The character control is currently very good, the main line is bright, and you can enter the pit vertically (self-evaluation)

The author hopes that there won't be any stories in the future where you get a named Ultraman from TV and then get absorbed into it by the reborn ones and supporting characters similar to the protagonist in your article, and then turn against the protagonist in turn, because I personally feel that writing this kind of thing feels like slandering this type of character [face covering] Because when you wrote about the mission to save the D60 planet, wasn't there a person also named Beidou? And didn't I remember that I was rescued by Ye Feng? That's why I had this idea, I hope it doesn't happen, oh, please [almost crying] [covering face] Let's wait and see, if it doesn't work, I'll run away [face covering] Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but the new plot is a bit uncomfortable for me. For those who like to read book reviews first before reading the book, I can tell you that the outline and content of this book are very good. The main reason why I wrote this review is that the latest plot is mainly for my preferences. It is a bit wrong, just a bit uncomfortable. To put it simply, you can read the book first. The book is very good, at least among the new Ott stories that I pay attention to, it is still relatively good.

It's interesting, isn't it? To be honest, if it wasn't too high-quality and too slow, this book would definitely be a must-read [Learned][Eating Melon] Regarding this matter, I will simply say a few words, as long as you understand it, this matter is the situation now, and everyone can see the specifics. Although everyone knows it, they still have to say a few words but the meaning is the same. Some people may not understand it very well, and they don't need to guess if they don't know. This kind of thing is rare. In short, I just want to say that everyone understands it, and I won't explain it to those who don't understand it. After all, you just know it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . There's nothing down there . . . . . . . . . Really nothing . . . . . . . . . Very good, very tenacious, okay? I admit that you are awesome. . . . . . . . Sorry, I only have a shadow in the human world. How can we live together but die differently? When will we know each other when we miss each other? It's embarrassing to be at this point in the night.

I think this book is very good-looking. First of all, it doesn't have any poisonous points or a harem. The protagonists are not overly capable in combat. There are just some small points, such as two high school students who saw the strength of SanDisk in the forum but still wanted to fight for it. (This is a shortcoming in my personal opinion) Secondly, there is no such thing as a realm. Ultraman is Ultraman. The protagonist is black and white, and he must avenge himself. The characters are portrayed in detail. There are just a few female villains. Totally a good book. Finally, let's talk about a big drawback: updates are too slow! ! ! Not enough! ! !

People who like online games and Ultraman are silent after watching this. It's hard to comment on the new track. Come and see it for yourselves.

A refreshing novel that cleverly combines online game writing with Ultraman

It's very good-looking. I just need more updates. I'm still waiting for the protagonist to become Trigga and go find Carmilla. The protagonist has a Tiga deity, so he must also have a Triga deity [laughing]