After Becoming the Fake Young Master, I Redeemed the Reborn Real One

The setting of this article is actually very good. After reading the beginning, I felt that it should be a good two-strong redemption story. However, in the middle of the article, the whole character gradually disappeared. At the beginning, Yan Yu was strong and elegant, spoke well and advanced, knew how to fight, was decisive in dealing with problems, and had three correct views. In the middle, she started to look like a "spoiled wife". She blushed all the time, was pressed and hugged by Pei Qian (who had not yet grown taller and was very weak), and even drooled when she saw delicious food. The same goes for Pei Qian, who has a lot of greasy behaviors and thoughts that seem like a domineering boss. . At first Yan Yu knew clearly that he was number 1, but later he thought many times that he should become the protagonist. . One moment she is very delicate, and the next moment she behaves like a gentleman, saying that she should be 1 Over and over again, I feel like the character has completely disappeared. It feels very fragmented, which is really a pity. If I can stick to the original setting, this should be a very good text.

The overall plot is good, but some sentences are missing in some of the previous paragraphs. In the end, can there be a side story about System 001 and 0517? They really get along well [laugh][laugh]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The author is good looking and the relationship between the characters is very smooth. The plot is also very, very good, ah, ah, ah. I really like the gentle character of the protagonist. The pull between the two people is also very, very, very attractive, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Well, actually, when I first watched it, I found it quite interesting. The setting of Shou is that someone comes from heaven to love the male protagonist. I thought it was quite good to see them slap the scumbag in the face together. Also, the setting of the male protagonist's biological father and mother not being evil was quite good. I think I can keep reading it. During the middle period of knowing suddenly, I could see that Shou was going to be the most popular person, but the relationship between Shou and Shou was very sudden, especially during the exam period. It was really a sudden conversation between the two of them about their feelings. There was no foreshadowing, and it was a bit too affecting the perception. I know I have written about Shou before. I wanted to strive to be the new protagonist, and I have always liked Shou, but it was very sudden, because in the previous setting, although Shou was striving for it, there was no need to talk about it. It was the ambiguous pull to the confession that was really sudden. I once suspected that I had missed it. In fact, I think Gong accepts Shou very quickly. I'm not saying that he wants to abuse one party, but I just think it's a bit untenable. Even if it gives me the feeling, some authors actually say that emm Shou is here to save the protagonist without hesitation, and Gong will fall in love with Shou. Then the life experiences of the protagonists are a bit complicated, so complicated that they become a bit cumbersome. In fact, after looking at it, it is okay. Personally, I may prefer the long flow. The whole book progresses very quickly, and it is also refreshing. They love each other, and the plot is really not draggy. This is still a good review. I think the character of the protagonist and his parents are good. If you don't like the slow flow of water and like to read simple, fast-paced, sweet and sweet stories about mutual affection, you can read this. [Thinking]

Shengliu: It's true that it's very redeeming. It's a sweet cookie, but it tastes like a pebble. (Personally, I think it's a bit of a spoiler.) There are too many single-point arrows. I saw Xie appear on the stage. I was interested and liked it as soon as he appeared. It was too old-fashioned, especially when it comes to attacking and accepting to confirm one's feelings (this is a lightning protection point). The other one is Shen. I know he has a lot of roles, but he jumps around every time.

Two-way redemption! Pure love! Full character design! Full of bugs (rebirth time travel system, real and fake young master jokes)! Double academic masters hehehehehe! It's not all full! A few hundred articles, but a big melon is planted in them! And the pair of CPs in it are really good, hehehe! The gentle and jade-like fake young master is a bit sinister! Super cute, who knows? Woohoo, okay, I know who understands. The possessive protagonist Gong! And a little green tea, hehe! All in all, it's a very interesting redemption-type article with a lot of real and fake young master jokes! The writing at the end is very sweet, woo woo Hey hey hey, I love it so much, hey hey! I love it, I love it, this kind of true and false young master story, oh ho ho ho, who understands? The sense of redemption that goes in both directions! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Of course, I also like another character in it. Ding Bai's acting is really good in the entertainment industry. All the characters are switched. Really, how can I put it! He has his own publicity, and the world will be sober in the future.

The protagonist's views are very upright, and the redemption type of article itself is very heart-warming. This book also revolves around the mystery of "who is whose child?", Which is awesome [face covering] It's a novel experience

The writing is really beautiful and the CP is very easy to use. It's really really really really super invincible and beautiful [crying] [crying]

Nice! The setting is very interesting! The character design of the protagonist is also very good [Like] [Like] [Like] But from the comments, it seems that it has been deleted a lot. It can be seen that the original book should be in high school. Where in college do you write questions every day? And the joint entrance examination? Can I still change schools through taking exams? Anyway, I have never heard of a university where you can change schools by taking exams. And now you can get married in college, but you can't fall in love? Which other university can graduate in one year? So what the comments say about Yan Yu being a senior in high school, Pei Qian being a freshman in high school and then skipping to senior year, and taking the college entrance examination a year later, I think it is true.

It's good-looking, good-looking, and the people in it are all very intelligent. I really enjoyed watching the slap in the face. However, I didn't know who Yan Yu's biological parents were until the end of the book, and the author didn't write it clearly. I'm still very curious about this [facepalm]