
Imprisoned Within My Own Borders
划地如囚
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I stayed up all night to get to chapter 113, it was really good. The male protagonist is very cool and cool when he gets upset, and the other minor supporting characters also have rich personalities. The article is very detailed from beginning to end, there are no pitfalls at all, and the plot is not criticized at all. It depends on whether the later author can maintain it. While reading the article and reading the comments, many people think that the male protagonist should not have anything to do with his family, but in fact, it is okay. In ancient times, the male protagonist can grow up smoothly, which has proved that the family tradition is good. No one is perfect, and everyone will have problems to some extent. When it comes to family, the bond will always be deep and shallow. If there had been no further frame-up, the male protagonist would have been able to grow up healthily. It's a pity that the neglect of the family and the evil people's calculation of cause and effect ruined the ordinary life of the male protagonist. In the previous life, in the end, the male protagonist only had Mu Ruan by his side, and no one else. After Mu Rui's absence, the male protagonist directly turned into a murderous god. It can be seen that the male protagonist actually needs someone to accompany him. Also, when the family was ransacked, the tribesmen already recognized him, but no one said a word, which can be regarded as saving the male protagonist's life. Moreover, after the death of a clan member, the male protagonist also ordered his men to collect the family's belongings.
The content is very novel, unconventional, and the rhythm is good. The writing style is also good, not too trivial, and the main characters are also very three-dimensional, not a single character, like the protagonist's mother, who is very complicated. In a chaotic society, you can only seize every opportunity you can take advantage of. The only thing that may cause controversy is what the supporting actress does. But for me, it's not a big problem and it's not a big deal. If you mind, I don't recommend watching it. I hope that the emotional development of the two male protagonists this time will be more obvious, and that while continuing the plot, there will be more changes in the love between the male protagonists. Secondly, I suggest the author change his name to a better and more appropriate name, otherwise he will be easily ignored and fail to attract the audience. Then there is the introduction. I hope the author can add a hook or write it more attractively. Otherwise, it would be a pity that such a beautiful novel has so few readers. I have read three books by the author. I hope this book will be better written, rated higher, and more popular than before.
Seeing that there are about sixty chapters now, it is tied. So far: 1. The characters and plot are logical. Different characters have different personalities. They are not stereotyped and can be logically consistent despite complexity. I haven't seen any retarded supporting characters or plot yet. 2. The writing style is sophisticated and the rhythm of the writing is well grasped. The author is of high quality. 3. The story is a story I like. The protagonist is very capable, decisive and skillful in doing things, and there is no so-called kindness that should not be there. Very good. 4. Cp, there should be cp. Although there is not much progress in the love line at present, but with the strong setting and the plot conflict hooks laid in advance, I personally think this part is worth looking forward to.
Finished chasing it, it looks great. CP should be Late Autumn, right [laughing] The back doesn't look as good as the front. Although the role of the time-traveling male supporting actor can be understood as an auxiliary to light up the technology tree for the protagonist, the overly modern words and deeds really make people feel uncomfortable, and the good ancient imperial examination and court political battles are affected to be a bit nondescript.
The main text is very good, the writing is logical, the plot progresses quickly, the emotional development is also good, and it is not frustrating at all, but the extras are different, and this refers specifically to the extras about withdrawal. The main text is a refreshing article, about withdrawal. Because the extra chapter mainly describes He Pei'an's emotional experience in the early stage, he looks the same as the ancestor of the He family in the main story who was named queen by two emperors. He is Lin Yu's best friend. It's the kind of forced love. The status gap is very large. So there will be some descriptions of He Pei'an being forced to obey, which makes people uncomfortable to read. Moreover, He Pei'an's final CP may be that Chen. Judging from the description, he is also a poisonous snake behind the scenes. He has intervened in many of He Pei'an's sufferings. If they were to be written as a couple, it would be really uncomfortable to read. Of course, this refers specifically to me, so if you don't like forced love that hurts the other person's body and ruins your future, please decide carefully whether you want to read it. Anyway, it is a highlight here.
It's very good to watch, and the plot and characters are pretty good. Some people want to ask whether the main CP is the enemy of the country (to avoid spoilers, I can only say that they are not enemies of the country. The main CP is on the same front. If you want to read it, you can go to Chapter 105 directly), and the relationship between the family and the protagonist (the family was obviously not very good to the protagonist in the previous life, but why is the protagonist okay with the family in this life? The protagonist's thoughts are in Chapter 134). If you are not afraid of spoilers, you can just click on the screenshot in my comment area. Mu Qiu in the previous life (called Mu Ru in the previous life) and the protagonist. I can only say that the relationship was very good, but the ending was regrettable. Hey, chapters 107~109, I have almost finished writing about my past life. It's really frustrating but unfortunately I had an accident (you can't set the flag, "I'll do whatever I want when I get back", I must not say that), it's a bit too painful. I won't post screenshots of this in the comment section because it's a bit too long. If you want to read it, I strongly recommend you jump directly to the middle of 107. All the way to chapter 109 are past life plots. The plot between the two of them in their previous life was really good.
La la la la, I found another good novel to my surprise. It's a Machiavellian story. The male protagonist has a super high IQ. Zhizhi is a cute baby who combines beauty and talent. He is really ruthless and awesome. Mu Qiu is also very cute. She made it difficult for her subordinates because she couldn't understand the love letter Zhizhi gave her, which made me laugh so hard. They are so sweet. The plot is very novel. At first I thought it was an ordinary rebirth novel, but I didn't expect that there was someone who traveled through time in it, and the baby was also very good. Overall, the characters in the novel are all flesh and blood. It was especially fun when Zhizhi gave money to his father (I don't know who the father is [laughing])
It's so amazing. I wonder how Red Persimmon could have such a great book. It reminded me of the feeling I had when I read Jiang Jinjiu's magical book. The plot is all in one go. The plot is fast but not chaotic, and the logic is clear. The protagonist is smart and almost demonic. Gods can kill gods, and Buddhas can kill Buddhas. It's so cool. The emotional line is also very sweet. I have some small desserts without affecting the progress of the main plot. The rhythm is very comfortable. Teacher, please keep writing! ! !
It's very good. So far, the protagonist is taking the imperial examination very fast. Every plot is not redundant. The words and sentences are also very consistent with the background of the story. The sentences and paragraphs are also very concise. There won't be a long paragraph that makes people confused and doesn't know what it is about. Moreover, the subject matter of this book is very attractive. I will keep pursuing it. I wish the author will write better and better [Blow kiss]
I just like the thoughtful, ruthless and decisive protagonist! The old man of the Ye family, Zheng Moumou, Mu Qiu, Tao Moumou, and Mr. Wen are all smart people, no one is stupid, and many of the villains are not described as disgusting. I like it very much! Hope there will be more!