Heartless Evil Ghost

The plot settings are all good. I saw that Luo Suyuan, a very proud and proud person, became a slave, had self-awareness, and was a pariah, but had to obey the protagonist's orders, and then he obeyed directly. It was so fun to watch, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Although there are a few people who read it, I still hope that the author will not abandon the book and update it soon [crying]

After reading the book, I was very touched. This book seems a bit abstract, and the writing style is a bit distorted at times, but I don't know why but it's very good. This kind of emotional line is rare now, but I really like it. The main line is similar to dark literature, which most people are not good at, but I feel that the author is very thoughtful and has a strong desire to create. The writing is both realistic and abstract. Although sometimes it hurts to see the author want to express something, but the writing power is not enough to write it out, and I don't like dark novels very much (although this book is just a little bit rough), but this story attracted me. The whole story gave me an absurd and hazy beauty. It is refreshing and well controlled. The author understands it. I hope there can be more scenes involving the use of vests to show off, which would be fun to watch. Ps: Stop persecuting Yuanyuan [crying]

Dear Dahei, your words are as bright as the stars, and each chapter is a shining pearl on the sky. However, recently, the stars seem to be silent for a moment, which makes us readers who look up at the stars feel wistful. Like Li Bai's "writing falls in the storm, and the poem turns into weeping ghosts and gods", I hope you can once again display your talents and let the unfinished story pour out like the Milky Way, full of brilliance. We are waiting for your pen and ink just like we are waiting for a grand meteor shower. May your inspiration be like the bright moon in the sky, illuminating the silent night sky and taking us back to the magnificent world of words.

A very real protagonist, he is addicted to power and strength, but also has a certain conscience. It is much more real than those protagonists who are either arrogant or calm after gaining strength and power. He will feel guilty and uneasy about what he has done, and he will also make excuses for himself out of greed. This is not a likable protagonist, but he is one of the rare protagonists who is real enough. He is more like a normal person, rather than a heinous villain or a saint who wants nothing. But because of this, the audience for such a protagonist is much smaller, and it is easy to arouse the disgust of readers, because most people would rather see a protagonist whose character and strength are above reality, or a protagonist who is perfect in all aspects. Characters that are too real often cannot be perfect, and even have many shortcomings. Starting with an imperfect protagonist can be said to be both good and bad. If the author can write the protagonist's growth experience and changes in the subsequent content well (this is difficult, at least I have not seen a few books do this in so many years), it will become a highlight of the book. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better. I still like this book. [Understood]

The structure is clear, the content is substantial, and the plot is also very novel. The protagonist tends to be in a dark direction, so go to the side if you don't like it [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] (Talking about when the protagonist will marry Yuanyuan [admiration])

Front row reminder: This book may be very uncomfortable for readers who like lawful books. Maybe you read it well at the beginning, but suddenly got a big knife in the back. This book belongs to the dark genre (including the plot of sand abuse). In the early stage, the male protagonist is a lawful neutral type, focusing on daily plots, which is more conventional, but in the later stage, he is a chaotic evil and conspirator (it is estimated that the current plot will not be washed). In the middle, I personally think the change is a bit abrupt, and there are pitfalls in this area that can be avoided in advance. But the overall evaluation is that if you like dark flow, you might as well give it a try and look forward to the follow-up development.

Now that I see it, it's pretty good. The writing style is indeed not as beautiful as the author said, but it is very practical. It is already good in Tomato. The plot is not cliché.

Good reviews, absolutely good reviews! Although the author's writing style is not very good now, it is improving. Anyone who has read Eternal God Emperor knows that the writing style of Flying Fish was poor in the early stage, but it is very good in the later stage. This does not prevent Eternal World from being a poor book. On the contrary, it has witnessed the growth of an author. I believe Daheiyi's writing style will continue to improve. Come on! Don't stop writing all of a sudden, Qiuqiu~ [Shy]

The writing is very interesting, the final exam rules are also well designed, the plot is also good, it is a good work, I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I hope that the good work can be seen by more people This is a book that the Holy Mother will never read.

Alas, it's 3:30 now. I originally read the novel at night, but ended up being fascinated and forgetting the time. I feel that the author wrote it very well, and each character has distinct characteristics. I hope the author will continue to work hard!