One Piece: After the Electrical Major Gets Thunder

It feels like the high-quality pirate novels of previous years. The protagonist clearly knows his own strengths and weaknesses, has his own goals, and there are no gaps in his character. All in all, it is currently one of the top pirate fanfics on Tomato. The disadvantage is that there are too few updates! ! Lao Deng protects chapters for me! !

You can take a look at the complicated ingredients. The author is very detailed. What I like the most is the native Pirates' feelings about the protagonist's perspective. For example, Doflamingo longs to pull down the Celestial Dragons from the altar because he has witnessed hell at a young age and does not believe in beauty, but now he has seen the Angel Fruit (from his perspective) and understands the protagonist's ambition to establish a kingdom of heaven in this chaotic and sinful era. The series of psychological fluctuations caused by inner confusion and conflict with reality are very comfortable to watch. Similarly, there are Crane's evaluation and the rescued navy. I didn't see any poisonous points, and the ingredients are not complex enough so it might be difficult to read, but overall it's still a good fanfic [like]

The content is very detailed. This style looks very comfortable. I don't know if physical fitness will be improved in the future, and what about domineering? After all, it is still a pirate fan at heart (although it is only 20 chapters, it feels so long) The author, please come on (ᗜˬᗜ)

The character creation is very good, and the development of the Thunder Fruit is not limited to the Thunder Chakra mode or the cliché routines such as Chidori. After reading this book, reading this book, and then reading other One Piece fans, I suddenly feel nothing.

This is one of the most exciting One Piece fanfics I have ever read. There is no delay in getting the girl, and the battle scenes are very tense. The protagonist's portrayal of Dawn Queen's vest is really outstanding. If it weren't for the lack of mystery in the main perspective, the pressure from the perspective of the Knight of God is really full. Unfortunately, it seems that the author does not intend to write a very long novel, and will probably limit the plot to the world of pirates. I really want to see the protagonist yank technology after unifying the pirate world, surpass the speed of light, rush out of the universe, and conquer the star sea. Technology + Devil Fruit, unlimited imagination. The direct collision between Devil Fruit users and alien civilizations creates unparalleled creations and unparalleled grand scenes. That is the real charm that One Piece should have!

The first 8 chapters are about the protagonist laying the foundation and doing logistics, and there are original characters. It is recommended to continue reading, starting from the descent into the sea. This book is about a vest, with three vests in a large size, black, white and gray, and the backgrounds are logically closed to each other. The protagonist is cautious and never fights head-on. His physical skills and domineering skills are very weak. All four characters can be crushed by long-range attacks. He can defeat the Four Emperors hundreds of miles away and cannot fight back. No one except Kizaru can touch the protagonist. He forces the opponent to use long-range attacks. The fruit abilities are really good. The four abilities are all thunderous but behave like four fruits. I have never lost my horse. The plot is reasonable without ruining the characters, different things can be done without being confused, and the characters of the original work are well restored. The protagonist is a stallion, but he doesn't collect them randomly. Everyone has a love line. He has children, but they don't play a big role in the plot. Only the queen collects a harem. Several vests have highlights, the villain's vest is the most handsome and cool with highlights, and the Shichibukai vest has the most expressive power without any pressure in terms of combat power.

It's a very interesting book. The following is my personal evaluation of Chapter 1 of Volume 1 and Chapter 53 of Volume 2. In terms of content: The content is also very in line with the mentality of time travellers. If you travel to the pirate world in peacetime, how can you overthrow the world government just because you see the suffering of civilians? (Would you make it your lifelong goal to work hard just because others are suffering? Most people must help within their ability.) Traveling back in time is definitely a time to enjoy the blessings of being together, especially when you are so handsome, and the pace is very good and not too draggy, and the writing is very nice I listened to the whole book and didn't find anything strange. In terms of fruits: The development of the Thunder Fruit is quite hard-core (scientifically, it can be seen that the author is very careful to check the information), and it is also in line with the setting of the original Devil Fruit (derived from people's wishes). After awakening, it also becomes a fantasy beast species (version answer) Some suggestions for the author: I hope that the protagonist's domineering and physical constitution can be enhanced (you can make the physique stronger after awakening from the phantom beast species or transform the blood factor, after all, it is the same thing as the devil fruit that runs through the work of One Piece) and add the ability of the great swordsman (after all, he has obtained the black sword Shusui)

The writing of this book is very good. The author is the reincarnation of Lao Deng. The development of Thunder Fruit is very scientific and rigorous, and it is well-founded (supported by real cases/theoretical knowledge, and the professional terminology of electromagnetics seems very bluffing). It is very enjoyable to read. Multiple heroines

It's a really good pirate novel. You may need a little patience in the beginning. If you don't have the patience, you can skip to Chapter 21 of Volume 5 to read about the handsome guy (here the protagonist wears a vest, and this Liming Qing is so handsome and the portrayal is very vivid). The thunder fruit has been developed to a whole new level and can be explained scientifically. If the author's rating is down, I'll give it 5 stars. I hope the author's books will get better and better (I saw some comments earlier about writing about children). There really aren't many plots about children in this book. The protagonist is a king and has a child. It doesn't matter. After all, he is an archangel that everyone loves.

It has a lot of imagination, knows how to organize things, and the plot is smooth, except for the emotional line, which is a little awkward. In other aspects, such as the excellent character creation and the obvious outline of the main and branch plots, the quality of this book is already the best in Tomato.

This One Piece fanfic is well written. While respecting the original work, the author can make his own reasonable inferences on some points that the original author is vague or has not mentioned. This is the best in One Piece I have read. Behind-the-scenes flow, Gou Dao, vest flow, and knowledge flow, I thought it would be boring at first. It doesn't have the passion and punch-to-flesh feeling of fighting the enemy head-on. The more I read, the better it gets. It goes from low to high, and there aren't many low-level chapters. Unlike other novels, which often start at the peak and get slower as you go on. The images of the three vests are all well portrayed, but I like Liming Qing's vest, which makes me feel as excited as watching One Piece. Her personality and strength make me feel like the big boss behind the scenes. The scripts and stage plays created by the three vests and the body in front of the world are very exciting, the story line is very smooth, and it looks very comfortable. This fan novel is the best I have ever read. There is no perfect novel. Among all the One Piece fan novels I have read, I give it a 9.9 Rating.

I think it's okay, but it's just not passionate enough, which makes it difficult for people who like to watch One Piece to accept it. But I personally think it's pretty good. The plot and writing are both good. It's just a bit of a test of my imagination. After all, I haven't watched so many anime, so the pictures are all based on my imagination.

As expected of a veteran author of two-dimensional otaku articles, very fragrant I used to follow the Blue Eyes narrative poem, which is considered one of my most popular fanfics.

The first few pictures are really not that attractive. After about 10 chapters, it became smoother and smoother, more beautiful and more attractive. Now, after reading most of it, I feel that it is to my liking. Regardless of the protagonist's character or behavior, they are all my favorite type, and the various jokes are not too abrupt. And even if you don't understand it, it won't affect your reading. My writing skills are pretty good. And it's more in line with the overall tone of Pirates. And the author is relatively consistent with the original work. There aren't too many magic changes, there aren't those obvious loopholes, I'm not a Cloud Pirates fan. Yun is a 2D fan, but an old 2D player who really has ink and knows a lot. I like the two-dimensional one. Highly recommended. The first part may not be that attractive, but it will be good if you get over it. Or you can skip more than 10 pictures and start watching directly, but it won't be that smooth. I like this style very much. Among the many pirate fanfics I've read, it's at the top. Top five, I have read Pirates fanfics on multiple platforms. I have also dabbled in fan fiction quite extensively. If you like original fan fiction, you shouldn't miss it. The battle scenes are very well written. To me, they are as good as any other Pirates fan fiction I have ever seen. Good reviews, it gets better and better later on. I'll finish it in one go.

Generally speaking, there are no shortcomings. It can be seen that the author really wants to write it, he is very serious, and the plot is also very rigorous. It's just that the first few chapters are a bit too monotonous. There are many original characters and a lot of content that has nothing to do with pirates. It's easy for people to run away after reading a few pages. The cover and names also smell like AI.

The development of the thunder fruit is written very scientifically, and the protagonist's fighting method is also very scientific. It feels more in line with personal aesthetics than other pirate novels that focus on practicing domineering, swordsmanship, physical fitness, etc. When it comes to recruiting girls, as long as there is no divine eagle, this book is quite suitable for this. In short, because it uses a lot of popular science to foreshadow the various events and pretense later on, it is a novel that is suitable for continuous reading.

The writing is very nice, there are many women and there are pictures. The fighting scenes are not like those in novels, but some of them overly emphasize the non-domineering power and substitute reality. For example, in the original novel, space can breathe, and there are fish people living under the sea, so there is no need to consider water pressure. There are also gamma rays. You are really powerful when you release reality, but in the world of pirates The attack is nothing at all, Luo can use it, Mingge and Kaido are not affected by one attack, so Kaido is affected by radiation and has a slow recovery. It is impossible to recover by removing the irradiated part. Also, the fruit is a bit too wasteful. It makes sense to burn it for women, but the two top fantasy beasts, vampires and pink dragons, are not for women. . . If the two lieutenants are properly allocated, it will be easy. Some top superhumans such as Barrier are also given to women. The protagonist establishes a surveillance network and can get more opportunities from original works and theatrical versions, such as Seven Star Sword, Carnation, Thousand Year Dragon and so on. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed, and it is worth watching.

I didn't finish reading the beginning at first, but I added it to my bookshelf. [Thinking] Now that I have read the first three volumes, in general, they are very interesting. The protagonist is disguised as an angel with a thunder fruit. In the pirate world, he is also disguised as an archangel (that is, the good old man). In addition, there are other vests (which can be seen as the male protagonist doing cosplay, alas, two-dimensional 😋). The combat power is okay. I understand that the male protagonist is a mage or scientist, so there is no such thing as punching to the flesh, but the ultra-long-distance and long-range strikes are also very new. Almost the male protagonist eats the fruit and then targets the Shichibukai. When developing the vest using the Shining, the target is partial to the general level (extreme speed, high attack, low damage, high damage). Simply developing the fruit is enough to rank in the T0 ranks. All in all, it's quite a good read. The author is also a veteran. There's nothing poisonous about it, such as opening a harem, a religious country, multiple armor exercises, and fighting for hegemony. [Thinking] The current protagonist is slowly trying to change the world, and I'm looking forward to it.

Above average, there is no sense of immersion that makes people forget time. Picking one star, because the heroine's oral fetish looks uncomfortable Shouldn't children be written in the finale?

Finished reading, Ma Jia Liu. But it's cool. Every vest is ridiculously powerful. My favorite is the thunder vest, which really demonstrates the intimidating power of thunder. Speedster, super long-range attack, a whole intercontinental missile, hit and run whenever you want. Dare to show your teeth? Your knowledge covers an island? I will directly run out for more than 1,000 kilometers and bomb you at fixed points. No matter how awesome you are, what can you do if you can't beat me? With this attack range and intensity, Kizaru said that the Thunder Vest would be the one to die in a life-or-death battle with any general other than him. This was so reasonable and well-founded.

So lively, man. I came across this book a long time ago. After reading a little bit, I put it away for a long time and it was so cool to read it again. It is in a fanfic. From ramming to pulling, it can be ranked from top to ramming. Highly recommended.

Beautiful, love watching. The protagonist is no longer a guy who suddenly became angry after traveling through a real-life abandoned house.

First impression score The start is very satisfying and not too slow. It's just that there are too many explanations in parentheses by the author, which affects the perception... Wouldn't it be better to post the author's comments or paragraph comments when dealing with the bully? From time to time, a paragraph of negative energy text is included in the text, which affects the perception. The original two female characters are very eye-catching, but the combination of Nero and the waist-length hair + wings image described by Chu Jian is a bit hard to imagine [laughing and crying]. On the other hand, Duan Pingfa's AI life picture is easier to bring in, which makes it very awkward to highlight the ummu monster in the subsequent words. We can look forward to subsequent development of capability design. There are currently several interesting ideas.

It's a pretty good book in Tomato, and the poison points are within my personal acceptable range. Although he has children, his appearance frequency is very low. It's just that the protagonist is the king's rational tool [laughing] There is a complete set of arrangements for the setting in One Piece and the development direction of the protagonist's fruit, instead of the mindless lightning segment body becoming infinitely stronger [eating melon] He is truly a man among men [laughs][like] You actually put Vegapunk's clone on it [laughs] [Like] If you had written this even if it was only the first hundred chapters, I wouldn't have cared, I would have even watched it as a curiosity. But when the protagonist has basically completed his power building, has a lot of beauties at home, and has both children, it is really [awkward laugh] to fill his harem with a "Vegapunk" with a male soul and a female body. Now looking back at the part about capturing the Seven Star Sword, the sense of spectacle that Qing Liming used to complete the collection of research materials, attract the attention of the navy, mislead the world government in the direction of exploration, and capture senior research talents in just one operation has completely disappeared. It has become the feeling that the archangel performed such a big drama for a "female" clone of Vegapunk [laughing and crying] I started reading it in 25 years. The male protagonist has clear goals, innovative ability development, and realistic power expansion. The various big scenes are also very vividly depicted. Personally, I feel that it is at the level of food and grass, and it can even be close to the level of fairy grass. As a result, a nine-turn large intestine was served towards the end? ? ? I have been following this book for a year and a half. I really want to see the ending and let the flowers bloom, but now I can't stop talking. [Aggrieved] You are trying to treat me like a judge!

The real two-spined salamander has excessive stem density. He is not the kind of kingly and passionate type who drives the vest, engages in diplomacy, and acts as the mastermind behind the scenes. A bit like the Bone King who is not that strong. The direction of fruit development is also very special, and it is a method of adding points with a steady flow. All in all, it suits my taste very well. After reading too many Hot-Blooded Pirates novels, this book has a unique flavor [smile][smile][smile]

Dear author, since I read your novel, I have been unable to sleep all night. I have been taking time to read it but have not caught up with the progress. When there are more than 100 pictures left, I can see the clues. I'm a diver and I can't help but speak up - it's so damn good-looking that the children are crying with envy. Please don't finish it and write more. It's not easy to see a character that fits my inner thoughts so well, with outstanding strength, perfect plot, and mixed with so many elements (especially Nero-chan [Adoration]) For now, it can be regarded as the last afterglow of the pirates! Ratings will be suppressed, and high-quality products will be immortal [lick the screen] Kougua is Taiyang Kouya! !

The logic is rigorous and not boring. It reminds me of Mounan from Q point, but there are too many plots about finding a woman. I feel that the author is not very good at constructing other interesting plots, and there are too few updates. I feel like he is the larvae of a great god. I hope the next book will be popular.

Marvelous! The protagonist has developed the ability of the thunder fruit very well and the author is also an experienced author. He frequently updates and checks information and is quite omnivorous. He can play Yu-Gi-Oh and Arknights. The protagonist is also very good. Among the protagonists, my favorite vest is Liming Qing from the Abyss. His elegant and changeable fighting style and his stability in playing with the enemy. This vest is great and there are many things that I like to see and see, and it does not occupy the space [smile]

It's a very good book. Although I'm not a veteran and don't know much about Warhammer, the author has pictures that let me know what kind of things and settings they are. This kind of author is rare. In my impression, creatures like angels generally have light element abilities, but it is also good to imitate them with thunder. At present, it seems that the basic abilities of this phantom beast species that rely on faith include electromagnetism to achieve mind reading and nuclear energy.

It's very beautiful, and the fruit's abilities are developed very reasonably. It can be said that it really shows why the Thunder Fruit is so powerful. The ability development part even has the feeling of scientific superpowers like in the Railgun. I think it's very interesting [Adoration]