A Hound Devil Fruit from the Start, Taking Kuma to Slaughter the Celestial Dragons!

It looks good. During this time period, you can go to the Sky Island to intercept Hu Xianglei's fruit population, gold, various shells, etc., The vampire fruit in Sleeping Town, the Seven-Star Sword plus three gems, the golden horn of the Rare Beast Island, Wano Country's third brother fantasy beast species, various ninjutsu, swordsmanship, ninja warriors, famous sword craftsmen, etc., IQ potion in the strong world, Barrett Mitsuki, Oden Ashura Doji, etc.

Yes, the guess is very logical, haha The ultimate evolution, taking back Yimu 🤭

It's a very good fanfic. Although the plot doesn't have much new ideas, the kind of free travel on the sea with one's own group is indeed very desirable, but there are still many flaws. For example, Ivan has never appeared again after the separation, and the forces of the Revolutionary Army have never appeared. Logically speaking, Long He The big head is related, the description of the bear became much less when the number of characters increased, the daily life on the ship was a bit monotonous, etc. Overall, it is very good, but the timeline is too early, and many familiar characters such as Shichibukai are still little kids and have no chance to appear. You can write it faster, the plot will speed up once Roger dies, and he has acquired so much money and industry. Since the goal is to overthrow the government, the army can also be mobilized. You can't just leave the small things of patrolling around to your "generals".

There is not much to say. Although there are many private settings, there is nothing to say. The rhythm and content are very good. In one sentence: quick update, love to watch, good to watch, watch more.

Xia Qi 😏 It's pretty good in the comics. Read and see the latest chapter, Iron-blooded Gray, Iron-fisted Garp, Iron-fisted Zefa, interesting, haha

I am a long-time pirate fanfic, and this book is the only pirate fanfic that I have rated six stars and reviewed seriously. I don't know why the book's rating is so low. I have read a lot of pirate fanfics, but there is one problem that I am very concerned about, that is, these fanfics were published too early, and the descriptions of the final boss Im are all kinds of weird. Either she is a woman, or she is a black dragon fruit or sea water fruit, which does not match the original work. There are very few plots that follow up to the present that truly restore Im's true abilities and fanfics that have been updated for so many chapters. I have read more than 600 chapters. The character of the protagonist in this book is very suitable for my taste. From the young and passionate at the beginning to the calm and powerful later, the character is very well shaped. The companions on the protagonist's boat are all my favorite characters. I like the fact that Xia Qi and the Empress are the heroines. There are many pirate fanfics where the male protagonist has a harem of women. But most of the protagonists are like perverts who fall in love with anyone they see. As long as the female characters who appear in the original plot have a slightly better appearance, I will not let go. To be honest, I don't like it, so I hope the author can maintain the protagonist's current personality and not repeat the bad appearance of other pirate fan fiction protagonists. The most important thing is to choose a suitable female protagonist, and it doesn't have to be too many. In addition to male partners on the ship, female partners do not necessarily have to become the protagonist's harem, such as Although she is beautiful, she is not suitable for being a heroine. I hope the author can adopt my opinion and let her just be a combatant. Let her be included in the harem and ruin the original plot and character like other fanfics. It feels very strange. If the author can adopt my opinion, I hope you can leave a comment for me. I also hope the author can continue to update this book and keep the quality of the plot getting better and better 👍👍👍

Not bad! Valley of the Gods didn't follow the plot, it just set up a scene framework, let's see if the follow-up writing can work.

@Chubby fat cat Hello author, I read Chapter 136 in one go. In addition to the temporary crew of Gugaohong, why are there no more crew members recruited later? Are there too few people? Will you, the later author, recruit potential people like Mihawk and Crocodile to the Ghost Cape Pirates ship?

Come on, come on, come on, it's very well written.

The writing style was really average in the early stage, but it was obviously getting better in the middle and later stages. The writing in the front is really not very good, and many parts are forced to be sensational, but the improvement in writing style is really visible to the naked eye. Starting from Rule the Sky Island (more than 70 chapters), there are basically no poisonous points in the back, and it becomes better and better as you go to the back.