Naruto: Obito Reborn, with Both Kamui from the Start

It's great. It's rare to see a fan on Tomato whose characters are so consistent with the original work. Although sometimes the comments section is messed up for no apparent reason (such as Shisui x Anko hahaha), the writing is really good [like] and it's not a fast food article. It really thinks about how to achieve the goal from Obito and Madara's pragmatic perspective. To the end of world peace, but it is not the kind of fanfic where the Holy Mother is about to die. He will kill if he should. The situation of the ninja and the thinking of the ninja. Some debates about justice and stance are difficult to see in other Naruto fanfics. There are really not many authors who are willing to write a novel about Obito's rebirth seriously these days without making bad jokes! Highly recommended reading! !

A very good article about taking Lin [crying]. The plot is not procrastinating and is reasonable. But it would be nice if the progress of taking Lin can be faster. For example, when Yuexia hugs Lin, she can write a kiss or something. Also, I don't like Terumi Mei to have sex with anyone [crying] Even if Terumi Mei is written off to death [crying] [crying] [crying] I have Terumi mysophobia. I hope the author can consider this kind of solo recommendation [almost crying]

It looks good, but the sensational part is a bit awkward. Although it is indeed a childish language that can be spoken in a relationship between a man and a woman, but...[Face covering]

It's very good-looking, and Obito's character is well-characterized.

The perspective is novel, the writing is fluent, and there are no unacceptable points... These are not reasons for praise! The most important thing is to update your teeth five times a day!

It looks good, exactly how I understand Obito to be.

It's interesting and can be watched, but there are still some shortcomings. For example, the fighting scenes are mediocre, but the characters are well described and the characters' personalities are not ruined. Come on, I'll probably get a rating of about 8.5 If I stick to it and finish it.

Very, very good Dailin Rice 😋 It's delicious. However, I feel that the quality is a bit ups and downs. In some places, it is written about fairy grass and most of the grains. There are some places that are more poisonous and need to be pampered. I doted on Xiaodu and skipped it without affecting the whole book at all. The thing about Xiaodu is that some local characters are OOC, such as Kushina/Provocative Lin/xxy Sasuke, and then Lalang balanced a lot of emotional scenes😇xyy Sasuke was really scared to tears But the author's writing style is very good and the emotional drama is very delicate. I like Obito the most. Dai Lin 99

Apart from anything else, the author who can update five chapters a day is really awesome, even though the writing style is a bit concise. [Shy][Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] Although I have not watched Naruto, this article builds the world of Naruto from Obito's perspective. It feels very restored, including the characters, events, environment, and some core ideas in Naruto, which are all very accurate. After all, Naruto is a classic work of Japanese comics, so it embodies the unique depressive and dark style of Japanese comics in many aspects of the world view. This article did a good job in dealing with the protagonist Obito and the world view in the early stage, but in the later stage, there was a change in the handling of the relationship between good and evil. I want to cheer for the author here. It can be seen that he has been working hard to maintain his strong imagination and enthusiasm for a long time. I believe the author must love Naruto very much, right? But I hope the author can regain the enthusiasm he had in the early days. In any case, to be able to create such exquisite works under such a grand worldview is already a rare good book for Tomato [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

You are so diligent, author. I haven't seen an author who updates five times a day for a long time! [Blow a kiss] And the quality is very good, very beautiful, highly recommended! [Congratulations] As long as the author keeps writing seriously, he will continue to follow up until the end! [Top post][Please update]