I Became a Rebellious Disciple, and My Master Locked Me Away

The emotional line of this book is very beautiful, it expresses love passionately, resolves conflicts with restraint, and well handles the uncomfortable feeling that "substitute literature" often brings to readers. The ending is a little rushed, and the final climax is very weak. The author hurriedly filled in the holes and ended it, maybe because he didn't want to write it. But this thing is just wishful thinking, as long as lovers get married eventually.

This system is really powerful, and the aspect of protecting the heroine is the best I have ever seen. I like the character of Master very much, but it would be better if the yandere value was lower. He always relies on force to oppress the heroine, which is a bit unbearable.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how good his writing is? Even after reading it, my depressed child is not odious. I just want to watch this thing 200 times a day. It's awesome. The bean bag tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome. OS finally allowed me to read the beautiful Lily Master and Disciple article. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not ugly at all. Xie Dang Qiu Shen Luo Shen is awesome. Wolf Xi is awesome Klaas. It's awesome, ok, I directly wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

This type of article, in my opinion, has been written by many authors with good writing skills, but this author has highlights and innovations. In fact, I think there are no problems in reading most of the article. You can just like the characters and so on. The main thing is that at the end, I feel that there are a little less things explained and there is no more improvement, so I feel that it ends suddenly and is a bit confusing. Apart from this, I think this may be the reason why this book has a lower score. Of course, it is possible that the author just wanted to write a shorter article. In my opinion, this important step of becoming a Taoist couple has been omitted. Well, there is actually a contract, but it is still missing.

Very nice, I like it. Thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful story. It feels like they are people in the real world. We all live under the same starry sky. Everyone has their own story, waiting for us to discover.

Throughout the book, the writing style and ideas are acceptable, at least it is one of the rare novels that I can listen to with my heart. However, the emotional line gives people an inexplicable feeling. In a sense, it should be regarded as two people falling in love at first sight, plus lusting after each other. And the most difficult thing for me to understand is that the heroine is set up at the beginning of the book. She has reached the peak of her combat power, but she is restrained everywhere. It feels quite inexplicable, and the author may not have described it well sometimes. Her combat power makes people feel that she is strong and weak at times. In short, this article is only suitable for simply looking at emotions, not deep thoughts. In short, it is okay to throw away your head and read it [Like]

Excellent product, excellent product. I like it very much. You must read it. The system is not very tricky. I like the heroine's outlook and thoughts very much.

Everyone, please read it. The relationship between the two people is very clearly described. After the master found out that he fell in love with the apprentice, he did not hesitate but quickly recognized his own feelings. Later, he discovered that the apprentice was not the original one, and he also recognized his own heart in time. The apprentice has also been seducing the master, relying on the master's love for him, doing whatever he wants (doing whatever he wants to the master.) A particularly delicious book

To be honest, I really like this novel. The main CP definitely has nothing to say, but the deputy CP is a bit off-putting. To be honest, I personally hate using other means to change people's emotions. Even though it was later explained that the dosage was very small, and I was tempted, I really couldn't accept it. However, this book is about the main CP after all, so there is no doubt about his perfection [Love] [Love] [Love]

Wow, it looks good, but I feel like I'm on the wrong side of it, holding high the banner of being No. 1 In the next year [making a face]