My Disciple Is So Obedient, Her Master Doesn’t Know What to Do

Overall it's pretty good, and the protagonist's character is quite likable. But there are still some details that have not been handled well. Although the jump of the timeline is not large, the connection is a bit sloppy, and some foreshadowings are also a bit sloppy, such as the last meeting between the Little Golden Man and the protagonist. If there is an extra story about the interaction between the two heroines after becoming immortals, people will be very excited about it. The emotional development between the two heroines is also very delicate. Although the interaction is less than other two-female protagonists, the silent progress of moisturizing things can indeed give people a different feeling.

I haven't read such a comfortable article in a long time. Every description seems calm, but it still makes people want to read on. The protagonist is also the kind of person who takes things steadily step by step. The name was exactly what she had hoped for, He Qing Haiyan. Master's name is also like his own person, pure and flawless, with noble conduct. And the sect they belong to. They are all so harmonious. After seeing so many intrigues and intrigues, it is rare to see someone so upright. Ahhhhh, it's so good, I can't bear to finish reading this short article. I like it, I really like the characters in this book. Even though occasionally I have to put my mind aside to watch the plot, but the relationship between loving each other and maintaining each other is so good. Sometimes the words also make people feel warm. "Keeping this peace also quietly warms Cheng Yanqing's innocent heart, which has been struggling with blood, fire and inner demons for ten years." Flaws are not hidden, this is my favorite setting recently👏👏👏👏👏👏

Very good, very good. I can't wait to read the comments. I'll take a look at the halfway point. The author is greatly reassured that there is absolutely no problem with the book. I also hope it becomes popular. It's always sad to see works with few reviews but high quality. Thank you to everyone who persists in producing good books despite difficult circumstances 🥺 I still finished reading it. Although I was very reluctant to part with it, I still stayed up late and finished eating the fine glutinous rice bran. It's really good to watch, especially the part about resolving inner demons. The reversal of acceptance is really addictive. I just can't get enough of it if there can be a side story about the beautiful life in the future.

To be honest, the pace of this book is very good and very comfortable. Prioritization is very appropriate. Although the book is relatively small, it has everything it needs. It includes some important nodes or plot descriptions in great detail. Overall, it is well detailed. It doesn't look verbose either. The author's writing style is very good and can be clearly felt.

It's super good-looking. It's a story about masters and apprentices, and about cultivating immortals. It's definitely going to be popular, and you can get into it.

Nice! There is just no extra story 😢

It's okay, I like this kind of subject better

It's great. Author, your novel will definitely be a hit.

It's okay, there are more main lines and less emotional lines.

It's very good to watch, but the only drawback is that it keeps following the main plot, there are a little bit of emotional scenes, but the ending is a bit...