I’m Already a Navy Admiral, and the Chat Group Only Just Appeared?

Everyone comes to see it, I can't be the only one eating it

There are minor flaws, but the ideas and themes are good, and the connection between the writing and the plot of the world can be more optimized. In fact, it might be better if you start writing before Kizaru became famous. The storyline will develop slowly and delicately, and you can gradually improve your own writing skills. Although it is a cool article, you have compressed the growth process at once, and then all aspects of the data are blurred. You gave us a very macro idea at once, but you failed to show us the basis of the macro idea. And judging from your macro theme, I don't see the possibility of an ending. The world can be added at any time, ∞! In fact, you write slowly, focusing on pirates, and supplementing the development of various worlds. You have written the finale of One Piece. If you say that the ending (cannot be written anymore), we can barely accept it! Newcomers, encourage and encourage, come on

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you wait for the second update, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is taken more seriously. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, the bookworm memories have a place for you, even if In a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark Traces. Updating your heart may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them All come from insufficient updates.

In fact, the highest level in these worlds is Pokémon. The second is Marvel. These two are pretty much in the first category, and the rest are pretty much the same. Naruto is indeed more powerful than the pirates, but he can still be considered to belong to the same dimension. Marvel and Pokémon are so much higher than the rest of the world. The Pokémon is just Arceus who can't stand it any more. But not Marvel. Any one of Marvel's backbones can push other worlds sideways. Thanos, Thor, and Ancient One were surprised that the pirate Hokage didn't even have the ability to play. He was not the same dimensional combat power.

A nanny story in a chat group. The protagonist replaces Kizaru as a time traveler, but it feels like it has no impact on the plot. He is just like a local.

It's beautiful, I love reading it. I can't enjoy such a good book by myself, so let me read it all [smile]

It's beautiful, the author is simply superhuman

No, I've been following this book for a month now, and even fifty reviews aren't enough [face covering]

"You have become an admiral, and the chat group just appeared?" Quiet Winter Chapter 84

I like it very much, come on! !