One Piece: The Marines' Iron Wall

This author is very good at changing the setting. In One Piece, whether he is a soldier or the protagonist, even if he is fatally injured after a fight, let alone three days of treatment, he can be alive and kicking the next day. It takes five days for ordinary people to heal your small wound, but three days for your protagonist. This is not just a change of settings. You have to hide it, hide it.

The previous settings were okay, but when I read Chapter 5, I couldn't hold myself together. I was so weak but I deliberately didn't eat enough. It was outrageous. If someone eats a bowl, you eat a bowl and a half, are you afraid that people will find out? Laughing like crazy

From the time we met Tom in Chapter 6, Tom has become the father of the protagonist. After a mission, the protagonist is so worried that he doesn't even think about food or drink. A whole chapter is devoted to how he misses Tom. There are many chapters like this in a row.

It's too long-winded. I have to write repeated things 4 or 5 times. I wrote 3 chapters with a simple golden finger. The protagonist is confused and has no clear goal, and the supporting characters are cowardly and incompetent without knowing it.

It's a lot of nonsense, especially Tom who is very irritated when he looks at it. It's so picky that most people can't stand it.

Tom is the protagonist's father. He puts aside the plot of helping others and respects the fate of others. What's more, he is a weakling and cannot protect himself. You are so stubborn but you are so nervous inside. You are not tired enough from work. You are jumping around and training at night. There is no one in the training ground at night. You are so good at fighting, but you are hiding your clumsiness. I will send you to the battlefield the next day.

The sour smell of literary youth 🤮

The author has ideas, but lacks perseverance. The repetition rate in recent chapters is too high, and he probably won't be able to continue writing. But the background of this book determines that as long as you persist and are down-to-earth, you can achieve results. It may not be as popular as other books in the early stage, but it must be accumulated and accumulated, so go for it!

Too stupid, I didn't understand the underlying logic of the novel background, and the self-righteous setting throughout the story, I'm really speechless.

Just like a fool, just a weak chicken