Mita: The Stronger I Get After Death, the More I Court Death

Personal evaluation 1. Plot: The author probably didn't want to write the protagonist to be so insane at the beginning. This can be seen from the previous system that rewards physical fitness. However, after the system rewarded physical fitness twice, the protagonist began to become particularly insane. 2. Setting: There are several shortcomings in the setting. For example, the protagonist is too confusing. In terms of setting, the author is more suitable for writing combat novels and is not suitable for writing daily life. Summary: The author has complained several times about why the data keeps dropping due to the inability to retain people. Here I would like to raise a few points. 1. The protagonist is too confusing. If you want to write a good protagonist, you just need to occasionally twist it. If it is too confusing, it will not be easy to write. 2. Every time the author talks about why the data keeps dropping, his book review always says that it is good to read and that I love to read it. As a result, the author is still confused when writing the protagonist. 3. Every time the author said that the data kept dropping, he could only see good and loving comments, and there were no other comments because those who liked it had left to comment, and those who didn't liked it had already left. There was no way to stay and comment on what the author was not good at. Finally, a personal comment: The author's writing style is very good. If the protagonist was not so confusing, it might leave a lot of readers. I also hope that the author can write the protagonist less confusingly and the plot line of the story can be more clear. Finally, come on, the author! ! ! (ᗜ ‸ ᗜ)

Obviously I only saw 12 pictures, but I felt like I had read it for a long time, and I figured it out. I felt that the introduction was good, and it was indeed a work of practice, with a nonsensical flavor. First of all, the dungeon passed by too fast. Before I could react, there were already three dungeons in Chapter 12. There is a sense of separation during epilepsy. Although there are some reasons before and after, the sense of isolation is still very serious. The combat power setting is that of blasting buildings and streets. I don't quite understand this aspect. It should be based on expressiveness. However, if I feel that if it is really set like this, Mita's world is still too small, and even the streets can dominate. I can't see the other ones, I'll think about it after I see them.

The author's writing is very good. There are not many words but the content is really rich. The various plot characters are well presented and have interactions that are very suitable for the characters. I have never seen a novel that has such a jump. I can't imagine that each plot can develop like this. It is an eye-opener. I hope it will give all Mittas a good ending.

Jump up, jump up, go crazy, go crazy, come and experience the real world, enjoy the baptism of knives, let us swim in the ocean of poison, and give you a different feeling. Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hahahahaha! ! ! There are no big poisonous spots, and there are no big knives. I commented so yesterday because it was Sunday night and I was still catching up on my homework.

I lament that all works in reality are just dead objects that follow the author's thinking. Even the characters on the narrative ladder are just what the author wants him to know. When I think that they are just characters piled up by a bunch of words or codes, I can't help but feel a little lonely. It is obvious that they are aware of our existence, but there is a narrative barrier that cannot be broken [almost crying]

This is the third Mita fanfic I have read. It is not unfair that this book has a current rating of 6.8. The boss battle started in a hurry and took a long time. Although the system changes the world when you die, there are not many worlds in the book for this reason. The boss is also very problematic. It is purely because the protagonist is too strong. I have no choice but to make the boss stronger. It is the kind of water that adds more facets and more water, but for a newbie, it is enough. Four stars encourage

Very beautiful and creative [like] But the final ending was too depressing, helpless and hopeless, so hopeless that it was numb. After death, the memory was reset, and the previous pain began to repeat again, and a new reincarnation began.

It's a bit weird [exploration] I'll look at it later Great! There is no knife plot so far [sending my heart]

It's good to watch, but it's best not to watch the ending. It's a bit uncomfortable.

There's not that much to say, it's a top-notch funny article and well worth watching.