Mita: Yunxi’s Adventure

The plot is indeed okay, just don't write it too fast, develop more emotional lines, don't rush the plot line, forget it if you can't change it at the beginning, you can slowly change it later. The characterization of the characters is reasonable and delicate. The most difficult to describe, Crazy Rice, has been designed to delete the code of the failed work, making it much more reasonable. There is also the newly added Amy, I like it very much.

It's very interesting, but the protagonist's character changes too quickly, without even a hint of warning. I don't know if it's my personal reason, but it's incomprehensible to me. All in all, it's a good read. I recommend reading it. I hope the next book will be published! 🥳

Great, I'm in a panic, I can't be saved

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