Starting with a Body of Steel: You’re Telling Me This Is Hogwarts?

(Upper middle) game-/7.5 Points+, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are good, the setting is good, the writing is good, the rhythm is soulful, the imagination is average, the characters are good, the main plot is average, and the logic is average. 6 Extra points: none Personal feelings: Invincible + HP, overall good, with some flaws, the writing is average, and the description is rather stiff. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points. (Above middle) Excellent-/7.5 Points+, mark,,,,,,

The author is very honest, saying that Superman is Superman, and he will not overwhelm his combat power like other novels. This is very refreshing to read, come on [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Magic is super, physical magic resistance points are full, how can I lose?

I have finished reading this book. To be honest, you must first accept the author's settings, and then there is nothing wrong with this book. I saw some comments before, saying that the author's Superman's magic resistance is 0, and there are also things like Dumbledore's self-destruction of his own weaknesses, or the extermination of goblins. I want to say that this is nothing. First of all, with Superman's speed, no one can hit him. It doesn't matter whether the magic resistance is 0 or not. Why care about these details? In addition, the hearts of people who are not from my race must be different. For example, if I had the power to exterminate the Xiaori race, I would kill them all without hesitation. Is there anything here that the Goblin Slayer cannot accept? If the article is enjoyable, don't worry about it too much. It's enough if it's enjoyable.

First of all, the second-year protagonist can defeat Grindelwald from the perspective of an ordinary person, and can kill him instantly from the perspective of Superman. Secondly, although there is zero magic resistance, the soul of an ordinary person, self-destruction of weaknesses, and the promise to protect Potter, only the first and second years are the last gods to come down to earth to protect Potter, which does not count as a nanny story. Finally, the inheritance of Huo Yigu Demon King, the fourth grade speed pass plot, and the high latitude, look forward to the follow-up plot. Overall, compared to the cookie-cutter plots, this one is very thoughtful and not bad.

Well, invincible. And he pretends that he can predict, so he should solve Sirius' problem earlier, and that's it.

Very good, except for being a bit malicious towards Ron [eating melon] And the heroine, as the protagonist's only weakness [exploration] The first 20 pictures are still very nice

It's very interesting, but why doesn't it have a female protagonist? Isn't Luna good?

Except for The Son of Grindelwald, which was completed last year, this is the second HP fanfic I have finished reading. No one died, and it is also my favorite without a female protagonist. There is no watery plot or too daily content. The content could be more detailed. I don't like this kind of theme very much at the end, but it is still very interesting and mindless.

Why is it only 6.1 Points? . . Isn't this better than those 9-point female channel HP?