Transformed into a Martial Arts Loli, I Punch Open the Road Between Life and Death

Why have you become so lazy? Su Bai used to write at least two, or even three or four, chapters a day.

Yes, it's similar to the previous book, but a bit bland. Adding more interesting elements would greatly improve the reading experience; at least, no one would drop out halfway through because of the long, uneventful chapters.

Chapter 113: His combat power has reached the ninth rank. If you factor in a 50x multiplier, he's practically invincible... His younger sister hasn't even become an apprentice yet, his best friend hasn't reached the rank, and the protagonist hasn't even gone to university. His previous interpersonal relationships are on a completely different level, making the combat power feel inconsistent.

If you don't want to update, brother, just say so! Why be so perfunctory with your sister? It makes me seem a bit presumptuous. It's true, brother's health is weak; he needs more rest. It's wrong of me to urge him like this. It hurts me to see him so unwell! But even though I'm worried about you, you can't just stop updating. Am I right, brother?

Nan Huairou hasn't awakened her talent yet. Once it does, she'll be like a dragon soaring into the sea, taking flight to the heavens! What does this passage mean? Does she have other talents? I don't think it's mentioned here. The fact that Song Yuanyuan is still slightly overweight after learning stance training indicates that her family is well-off and she is not lacking in nutrition, which is…

The writing is quite good, and the battle scenes are very vivid. I just don't know who the other female lead is. However, I'm more inclined to believe they all have wings. And as long as the relationship isn't confirmed, just ambiguous feelings probably won't get banned. Of course, this uncertainty only applies within the story; we don't know about outside of it.

Supporting the new book! It's another story of a poor start with a cheat code. This time, there's a younger sister, though I don't know if she's related to him.

It's actually quite interesting to write. But the formula is the same old one. It's just that the protagonist of that kind of novel from two or three years ago has been changed to a woman.

There's not much content yet, and it's free of harmful or problematic content—great job! The feedback from the main character leveling up is quite satisfying.

Could the author write a story where the protagonist is framed and forced into a secret realm, where he's held up for several years by a mysterious inheritance? Everyone assumes he's dead, including his sister, who also believes she's gone. Then, the protagonist transforms into an S-rank spiritual root, and when he emerges, he finds his sister invincible, easily defeated by her. That would be incredibly entertaining.