I Cultivate Immortality by Adding Longevity Points. How Will You Respond, Fellow Daoist?

Awesome, the best article on female immortality I have ever read! Although the heroine is stubborn, she does not follow male porn routines or capitalist routines. She is not a virgin, but she is not selfish either. Although she is cautious, she still has warmth with those close to her and believes in her. Although she is devoted to the Tao, she is not like a piece of wood that only knows how to practice and become colder and worse. She is very motivated. Perhaps what she was thinking was: Even if her qualifications are terrible, as long as she practices quickly enough, finds a few immortality skills, makes a few life-extending pills to cover up, and tries her best to advance before the "deadline", she doesn't have to cut off ties with her friends, right? It's very humane, and I like the protagonist very much [smirking] Great work, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

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Very good, it fully describes the ordinary path of cultivating immortality for low-level monks 💕. When the protagonist forms the elixir, he can just think about it and rebuild it again like Han Li when he formed the elixir. Anyway, the protagonist has poor talent 💕

It's quite nice to watch, quite relaxing to watch, and not too boring. For example, the conflict between Su Bai's Gou Dao and Xu Changge's was quite interesting, as well as the gap between the world of martial arts and the world of cultivating immortals. The pace is not very slow, except for the small climax every 50 chapters, which is quite enjoyable to watch. Compared with the fairy tales about going to heaven and earth, where a fight is like destroying the world, this kind of small-level fairy tales is quite good. I hope the author will keep writing. I'm really looking forward to the next one. The relationship between Su Bai and Chang Ge will take its time and don't be too hasty. This kind of light ambiguity still feels quite pricking to me.

The plot is very good, coherent and reasonable. It is very good in Tomato and the plot is also novel. It is not like other novels that all seem to have the same routines and templates. There are still some shortcomings in the character image, mostly in the description of actions and language. The psychology (the inner activities of the protagonist) is very well grasped, and the literary skills are good (unlike some authors who write about the psychological activities of the protagonist in such detail, it is like writing an expository essay, and there is really no desire to read further). But the image of the protagonist is not fleshed out enough and there are too few details. For example, I wrote a little bit about appearance at the beginning, but the rest of it was just brushed off, so I couldn't imagine the appearance of the protagonist when I read it. The author can write about the protagonist's appearance from multiple angles from time to time, such as when the protagonist meets new people and sees the protagonist from another person's perspective. There are also some expressions and very small and difficult-to-notice movements. More of these can be added, because this book is really small. Moreover, I suggest that the perspective does not need to be fixed on the protagonist, but can also be appropriately placed on characters other than the protagonist. You can use other people's perspectives to profile and highlight the protagonist. I don't know if my words are difficult to understand. In fact, what I want most is the details and demeanor of the protagonist. I really hope the author can add more, so that the reading experience will be better and I can feel that the protagonist is a character with flesh and bones. It's really hard to find a good book about Tomato that's good and tastes good. Now that I'm reading this book, it's really good, so I hope it will be better.

The first 350 chapters are relatively interesting. From development to growth is the most dynamic stage. Different people from different planes are equivalent to reading several novels at once, but they are integrated into one story with the protagonist's development in this world as the core. It can be said to be a half-full experience. Why do I say it's half full? Because the subsequent plot is like an assembly line with no emotion. One level of realm is followed by another. My evaluation is that it is unnecessary. And you can tell from the title of the book what the author wants to write, but from the overall feeling of the whole book, it is true that it is evil but not courageous. "Two hours in one hour, thirsty in two days." This kind of description is worse than not writing it. At the same time, the main character's style changes greatly, it is like a little white flower who became rich overnight and turned into a greasy uncle. It is difficult to describe in one sentence. It can be seen that the author has either changed people or is suppressed. Comprehensive evaluation: You can read it in the early stage. Recommendation index, two stars.

After reading it, I felt a little frustrated in the early stage of being a spiritual farmer, but it can be said that my strength has grown rapidly in the later stage, which is very exciting. I would like to ask who is the cp, will the two heroines have a harem, or is it just a simple romance? Will there be a lifespan theory in the end? I personally hope for a he

Overall, it's pretty good. It seems to be a sign of Lily, and it can be treated as no cp, but there are few fighting plots and the descriptions are not detailed enough, lacking thrilling scenes. There are no other problems. I hope that the protagonist will not be left alone without friends to accompany her until the end of her training.

Overall, this book looks pretty good. There isn't much poison in the plot. I just feel that the heroine's cultivation is getting faster and faster in the later stages. Apart from being a little poisonous (acceptable), there are all kinds of essences (it feels a bit like system gifts. I live forever in the book Invincible, but it is also acceptable). I think this kind of female channel immortality cultivation novel is quite rare (the immortality novels I searched are basically all about male protagonists, and female protagonists are quite rare) I think the plug-in Zhutianding is quite interesting. The protagonist of other longevity novels is the five-spirited root cultivator who stretches his crotch. It was really uncomfortable for me to read it. There are almost 100 pictures, and he is still practicing qi (I am not referring to all the longevity novels, but the basics in some of the texts I read) Xanadu is gifted with a crotch pull, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.) But the plug-in in this novel is quite interesting. It can travel to other worlds. There are basically no longevity novels I have read. This book is quite enjoyable. Although there are cheats, you still have to rely on your own efforts. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the author can update it more.

This is the only surviving harem story that I have read. Wannian Loli Laoden is really the most stubborn cultivator I have ever seen. She can't get out of any secret realm. I thought she was going to be a harem after reading the first half. The heroine only focused on cultivation, but when I saw the later, I realized that she had no strength. Once she had the strength, the heroine completely let herself go, and the mirror was so sharp that it flew up!