Harry Potter: Twin Shadows

To be honest, I personally think this book is very good at shaping the protagonist. In Troy's eyes, her brother is just an existence, and she will not regard herself and Tom as a complete community, just like what she said to Virgo. And Tom will not tell his sister everything about himself without any reservation, he will secretly study Horcruxes behind her back. Just like the author said, they don't understand what love is, and even regard each other as just companions at the beginning. They have only adapted to each other's existence in the past 11 years, and will not give up their own careers and interests for each other. There is also the story of the four giants. From the author's writing, I saw them as unique. The author broke our stereotypes. Gryffindor may not necessarily be brave and fearless, and may even be a gambler; Hufflepuff may not necessarily be loyal and firm, and may even be unfaithful to marriage; Ravenclaw may not necessarily know everything, and may not even understand what love is. Use their stories to promote the development of the main line, enrich the layers of the characters, make the characters more vivid, and let us see a more three-dimensional version of them [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] So why don't you update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]

Emmm, I see now that the plot is connected smoothly, (the author will also bury the plot) the love line and the career line do not conflict, I just hope it won't be in the end, and the setting really pricks my xp! (I understand, personally, I don't mean to downvote) I've read other fanfics where the heroine, Little Sun, is warm and so on. I feel like Tom doesn't trust others easily and will be warmed and come out of the darkness. But in this book, the twins have grown up together and the two are dependent on each other. I think it can explain the relationship line more reasonably without making the progress seem too fast. In the end, don't be, don't be, the author is begging you [smile] The children have been fooled by other swordsmen, wuwu [crying], it's okay to be tortured in the middle, the ending should be better for them

I haven't read Harry Potter myself and don't know the world view, but I really like the twin brothers and sisters Tom and Troy. The various descriptions in the article are very delicate, and there are foreshadowings, and they will be filled in slowly. The characters are all flesh and blood, and as far as I am concerned, I especially like the brothers and sisters. I think Tom's possessiveness towards Troy and Troy's dependence on Tom are all portrayed very well! Specially poke me xp. But I think it's also interesting that Tom and Troy will not give up their own interests because of each other. When they are older, they will have conflicts because of this (?) Then Tom can't stand Troy and wants to leave him, and then...[Shy][shy][shy](?) (But the above are all my guesses!) You have to work hard! I'm going to start school soon [crying] [crying] [crying] I hope I've updated a lot of chapters when I come back () Come on, come on, come on! I like you very much! ! !

It's a very good book. I've read a lot of fanfics, but this is the only HP fanfic that made my back feel numb. The author has good writing skills and a certain self-understanding of human nature. Whether it's the history he made up himself, the personal settings, or the plot direction, it's all to my liking. I can only say that there are thousands of people with different faces, but every face you want, Troy has it. Even if she is just a doll without a soul "Our marriage thread is hidden in our blood vessels. We are connected by blood and think alike. We are lovers sent by heaven." Even though the rating is only over eight points, among 1,000 people, there are 1,000 Hamlets. Anyway, I like [you taste it carefully] [eat the melon]

Super super pretty! The Tom written by Da Da is very appropriate. I really fall in love with a powerful heroine like Troy. The twin flowers blooming in the swamp are so touching! The writing is smooth, the plot has ups and downs, and there are foreshadowings. I will reply to comments seriously. Full marks for this masterpiece [I learned it] You must keep updating, I wish this book a huge hit [Love]

Absolutely... I felt so happy watching it. The writing is very good and very logical. Every couple is so annoying... (Faints) I can't help it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh choosing meI got up and wrote the exam in the middle of the night. I'm so passionate about my career. Anyway, it's really well written and the characters are very vivid. I love you, my dear.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking. Look good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good Look good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good Look good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good. Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking. Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking. Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking.

I like it very much, how can I say it? Very nice, but what next? I really like the original character of Lao Fu in this book, which has a kind of helpless youth. And what can I say about this book? The men in it can only be forced to accept the choice of the heroine. I am very happy about this, and overall it is very good. After I found this book, I stayed up for one night and two days to read it. Originally, I wasn't sure if I could rush back to school as soon as I had a fever, but then I found out that I couldn't. Then I gave it up and started staying up late. I originally wanted to take care of my health, but now I don't care. Holy shit, I feel like I'm going to explode now, but it's so beautiful. It's just because it's so beautiful that I can't help it. But it's sad. In the extra chapter, although it's not very detailed, Nott got what he wanted, but Voldemort didn't. But I like his character very much. It's very sad, and the extra chapter ended a little too hastily. I really want to know what happens after the heroine dies in that extra chapter. What happened again and what happened to Voldemort, I want to know this, and then his death, instead of jumping to his death all at once, it's so sad●●When I saw it later, I found that I felt so distressed. Tom had at least 15 years of companionship with the heroine from childhood to adulthood, but Voldemort was just like him. Also, the career of the heroine is really well written, and the unemployment benefits are very good. I love it so much. She can use everything she can for her career and rights. This is very good. I love it so much. The heroine is really charming. Sometimes I fall in love with the illusion of the heroine after watching half of it. When I find out that she is acting, I fall in love with her even more. To write such a character and such a story, I can only say that the author is too strong. I can only say that the heroine wants the heroine, so Voldemort did not get it in the end. It can only be said that the heroine's choice is not with him. It is so sad. The extra chapter is not with him, and it cannot be said that the heroine loves him very much, so she will save him, but the heroine has no soul in that world. She is controlled in that body. With the heroine's character, she cannot I am willing, but to end it all, I have to meet death, and death will definitely arouse the vigilance of the God of Death, and then be sent away. Even if there is no choice of the heroine, based on the heroine's character, it can be reasonably inferred that it will only lead to such an ending. I feel that Voldemort is not important enough for the heroine to endure this kind of control, and the heroine has already obtained her own soul. The heroine is definitely not willing to be in the state of being without a soul. I can only say that I accept it, all of this is reasonable, and it will definitely lead to that ending, unless the setting is different from the beginning. The heroine can have a soul in that world and is not controlled by the alchemy body. Why is Voldemort still so powerless in the extra story?

Well, it seems pretty good so far... But if you often read Tomato shorts, I suggest you don't open the comment area. I really can't stand it when I say one girl at a time...

[Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Invincible Thunder Li Juhaokan [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]