Transformers: Earth's Dark Age

It's good. There aren't many serious Transformers fanfictions these days. Other fanfictions either make jokes about character stereotypes or focus on romance and shipping couples 🤦, and they're all BL. This is truly torturous for a Transformers fan who has finished reading The Prime, Cyberpunk, and the Transformers movie.

The fanfiction is very well written. I hope it doesn't end up like the movie, where the fighting revolves around the same little planet countless times and ultimately continues there. It would be great to add villains from other races: the Zerg swarms, the Titans' massive size, the Protoss's various energy sensing (magic), the Necromancer's Annihilation, and the Terran's technology. There are so many to consider. I don't understand why the fighting is always just between the Mechs and Terrans.

The writing style is quite engaging, especially the parts about government departments responding to crises. It reads smoothly and naturally without feeling awkward at all. The factions are also the type I like, making it the most enjoyable novel I've ever read.

Keep it up, author! This is so authentic, it feels like a Chinese version of Transformers 1. The movie follows three storylines: Sam, soldiers, and codebreakers. This book, however, focuses on Li You, who was drafted into Dragon Shield, and the Autobot scout. Unlike the movie, it offers a storyline centered on the Transformers, with two parallel storylines. I wonder if it will connect with the movie plot later on. Please keep writing!

So far, this Transformers fanfiction, along with an older book called "Rise: Starting with Transformers," is one of my favorite fanfictions. Compared to "Rise," I prefer the world-building in this book. In my opinion, while the writing style is still somewhat immature, it is constantly improving, without feeling stiff or like something out of a primary school student's essay.

This book is pretty good to me. Considering it's a new book, I'll give it five stars. The plot of this book develops very, very slowly. Impatient readers may not be able to keep up. It's so slow that Leap, the Autobot scout (who should be an original character), doesn't make contact with humans until Chapter 70 (and even then, the contact isn't with officials, but with an ordinary person or…

It's good! Keep it up! Changing the title and synopsis might attract more readers. For example, you could write a synopsis about Transformers landing in China. Your current synopsis isn't appealing enough, and neither is the title. I really suggest the author change it; the results will definitely be better.

The writing is good; so far, apart from a misuse of the idiom "" (the most urgent matter at hand), there are no major flaws. It's clear the author put a lot of effort into it. The subject matter is also quite refreshing on the Tomato platform.

This is the best Transformers novel I've ever read on Tomato. Disappointed.

Compared to most deformed cows However, the daily update volume is not in line with the scale of an ensemble piece. So let's work ourselves to the bone! [Heavy punch] @Shuangjiangyu At least three or four updates a day, with two updates per person to keep the reader entertained.