Am I Your Moonlight? Aren't I Supposed to Be the Green-Tea Second Male Lead?

Not bad, dressed like the green tea white moonlight in Chasing a Husband, the angle is also very good. In the story about chasing a husband, as long as Bai Yueguang doesn't seek death, how can the female protagonists go back to chase the male protagonist? I hope to accept all the women around Turtle Man. Make him mad. After all, I am used to seeing the turtle man gathering a harem after her husband Wenli divorced. It's great to see the normal Bai Yueguang gathering a large harem.

I like to watch people like this. The agreement husband is the agreement husband. As long as Bai Yueguang is strong enough, what else does he have to do? Big cheers for the author [laughing] [like]

It's a really good idea, quite interesting. (Except for the plot between the protagonist and Liu Ruyan) Overall, it scores 9 points in Tomato, and the same genre on all platforms can also score 8 points. Worth a look. It is very important not to add too many female protagonists in the later stage, otherwise the plot will be bloated and the final impression will be reduced.

The writing is smooth and doesn't really look like a novice. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is delicate, the warming process is reasonable, and the details of the relationship are very comfortable. The most important thing is that the protagonist is very attentive to every heroine, and there is no feeling that the heroines only have unilateral emotional output.

The subject matter is very good. The anti-female channel routine has a future. In addition, forbidden love requires a good grasp of the situation.

@ The author writes very well, but I feel so strange 😳 You are not controlled by the system and say that you should develop according to the plot. What is the meaning of being with Lin Hao or dragging it all the time? And Liu Ruyan, every time I watch her plot, I get angry. She keeps emphasizing that those women seduced Lin Hao, but except for the childlike and thunderous one, the other two are not mentioned at all. So what is the protagonist working on? Then I wrote about the misunderstanding between Lin Hao and Liu Ruyan. All kinds of mess. You have to say the word count is too low. I feel that no one in Tomato will care too much about this. After all, it is free. It is a little watery. It keeps going back and forth, just to seduce Lin Hao. What about Lin Hao's misunderstanding? When he is reborn, he is just like the fly and mosquito. It will be killed in one go. It has to be buzzing all the time. It is annoying. But I have written it. I just want to complain. If this paragraph is compressed or given a role-playing system, it will be acceptable. And The protagonist really didn't take any action. He came back to play with his sister. Emperor Ruyan didn't make any arrangements. Just let nature take its course. I feel like this, but it's not a bad point, or I just didn't understand it. Is the protagonist going to change or does it not matter, or is he avoiding Lin Hao's revenge? I really don't understand it. The handling of Liu Ruyan's side is a bit too Buddhist, but the overall look is very good. I give the author a big thumbs up 👍 and will continue to follow up (I haven't finished it yet, but I saw the part about running a studio together and then said that Lin Hao would know about it again, so I was immediately blown away. I saw this several times and Lin Hao knew about it), so I am very curious about the protagonist. It doesn't matter whether you hide or just fight or say it doesn't matter And since the male protagonist already knows that there are three women who will fall in love with Lin Hao on the way to seduce him to divorce Liu Ruyan (rebirth version), why not just let Liu Ruyan and Lin Hao divorce (I have to say that if there is that kind of role-playing system, it would be very reasonable, because the rules have to follow the plot). Instead, he persuades Liu Ruyan not to divorce Lin Hao because his food is delicious, which is contrary to nature. Didn't the protagonist also say it later? Isn't it Lin Hao who cooks delicious food? I feel like the author wrote it My favorability towards Liu Ruyan's character has already been ruined. But writing the plot of the Su family is quite interesting. The nursery rhyme is indeed a bit embarrassing, but it is better than Liu Ruyan.

I love watching it. Although it is a villain, it avoids all the bad points that should be avoided. It takes care of me, a pure lover. As long as the author writes it himself, there is no need to change the outline because of someone else's ideas.

It's good-looking, counter-conventional, and actually resembles a villain protagonist. There is no system or anything like that. The golden finger is a talent upgrade and contact with the heroine to obtain part of the plot. But it's still a common problem with women's videos. The progress is a bit slow, but it's okay. It's relatively fast compared to similar articles.

Juxtaposed with another urban novel about Succubus, the urban novel Shuangjiao! They are all about a hundred new chapters.

Give me a 5-point support. This kind of anti-routine is pretty good. Some of the rants about chasing husbands are quite interesting, and some points are also well written. It seems that there are many women. I look forward to how it will end in the future.