Living Off a Woman! Starting with a Sign-In from My Sword Immortal Sister

"A gambling father, a sick mother, a broken family, and the new girl—I'm not washing her feet, but the mud of walking through the world, the rough edges and misfortunes smoothed by time, and I'm feeling sorry for her fate. She's in the prime of her youth, yet she bears a heavy burden, and all of this shouldn't be borne by her." "I still remember her gentle eyes that night, and her deep gaze.

It's alright, except the demon lord character isn't quite right, and the male lead's somewhat cringeworthy and awkward lines at the beginning are fine. The pacing is a bit slow though; I'm only halfway through the Qi Refining stage with my cultivation at around 50.

Overall it's alright, but could you please correct the typos and extra words? @AutumnRainyDay

It's very interesting, I highly recommend it.

I want to see teacher training information. When is the teacher training program?

Not bad, author, keep it up! Oh, I clicked the wrong one.

We have similar values, but if it were me, I would probably be more careful? I would start with the waiter and have the woman serve the porridge. Well, it's well-written, but it lacks immersion. It feels like there's a membrane between you and the writer, which is what's meant by insufficient detail and resulting in a disconnect – the writing still needs some polishing.

Personally, I think it's alright. A rushed ending is normal for an anime like Tomato, since everyone needs to make a living. At least the process was enjoyable, and the ending was happy. I'd give it an 8 out of 10.

It ended today, and I finished reading it, so I'll give it five stars. It filled in all the plot holes.

Ordinary daily life is good