Living Off a Woman! Starting with a Sign-In from My Sword Immortal Sister

"My gambling father, my sick mother, my broken family, and her new arrival. What I wash is not the feet, but the mud of walking in the world, the edges and misfortunes smoothed by time, the fate of cherishing her, the youthful years of great years, but she is burdened with heavy responsibilities, and she should not have to bear all this." "I still remember her watery eyes and her affectionate gaze that night. She didn't care about my car or my room, but she gave me all the tenderness in the world. At that moment, I was confused. I seemed to see the lost love again, approaching me again." "She put down the box in her hand, picked up the black hair between her lips and teeth, and tied it high. At that moment, the cool light shone on her body and also shone into my heart. At that moment, I could no longer tell whether the throbbing in my heart was because of love. Now that I think about it, it is no longer important." "Today, the bright moon is in the sky, and the beauty is full of thoughts. If I don't go there today, it will seem that I don't understand the charm. Although I have been poor for half my life and have no fame or fortune, I am still willing to add an insignificant touch to her at her best age. Love rises with the bell, but it is difficult to calm down when the bell stops. The origin and fall of the bell, and the fall of the bell is the beauty."

It's okay, except that the character design of the devil doesn't quite fit in, and the male protagonist in front of me is more of a middle-class and awkward person. There's no big problem. It's just that the progress is slow. I have practiced half of the Qi of more than 50 cards.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but can you correct the typos and multiple words @Autumn Rainy Day

Very interesting, really recommended

I want to see the training. When will the training be given?

Not bad, thank you to the author Wrong click,

We have similar values, but if it were me, I should pay more attention? I started directly as the waiter, and the girl started making porridge. How can I put it, the writing is good, but the sense of substitution is not strong, it is like a layer of film, which is the so-called sense of fragmentation caused by insufficient description of details-the writing still needs to be adapted.

Personally, I think it's okay. If it's not finished, it's normal for Tomato to eat. At least the process is beautiful and the ending is happy. My personal rating is 8 points.

It's finished today and I've finished watching it. I'll give it five stars. I've filled in all the holes that need to be filled.

It's good to talk about daily life