The Long-Legged Campus Beauty Fell for Boring Old Me First!

So far, I have read 73 chapters. The overall writing style is relatively light and "literary". The writing style is plain yet humorous, with frequent golden sentences and no lengthy rhetoric. However, the reading pressure is higher than that of similar genres, and it is not suitable for quick skimming, so some readers may feel tired from reading. As of now, the male and female protagonists have not established a romantic relationship. They are in the "best ambiguous period". They are restrained and sweet. The relationship progress is very smooth and natural, sweet, exciting and looking forward to it. I can't find any faults in the plot except for the "night visit to Guiyu Resort" which is too bold. Whether it is "Drama Rescue "Romeo and Juliet"" or "Material Crisis "Before Ebb"", they are both remarkable. The character creation rarely describes the character directly, but more about establishing the image through words and deeds. Some dialogues are not very daily, but it does not prevent the character from being vivid and three-dimensional, with memorable points. However, I think the character "Pan Zhipeng" is a bit vague. When I was writing this paragraph, I went back and read it, but I didn't remember him. 🤦 Above, the writing level is online, a very good work, the advantages and disadvantages are obvious, I look forward to the follow-up plot...

This book is to my liking. Not a novice. The author and the male protagonist are funny and funny. The dialogue is very interesting, and sometimes you need to think about it for a while, and then you will smile. The ironic humor in many places reminded me of the feeling I had when watching Han Han. The male and female protagonists are very good. The male protagonist is a boy who is afraid of trouble but not introverted. The female protagonist is not only beautiful, but also very kind and has a very good emotional intelligence. At present, relatively speaking, one is cold and the other is hot, and the male protagonist is the cold one, because his personality of "don't increase relationships unless necessary" makes him seem a bit sigma. Fine. The male protagonist has a biting sense of humour. I think this is a potentially good book. If I really want to find fault, I always feel that for a Tomato book, too many gags will make it more difficult to read. In particular, not everyone is the character of the male protagonist. Others should not speak too close to the male protagonist. This way, there is distinction and readers will not feel tired. I hope the author will do better and better.

I will use the most straightforward words, the least roundabout ways, the least pretentiousness, the least rhetoric, the least unnecessary foreshadowing, the least beat around the bush, the least hidden things, the least pranks, the least grandiose words, the least elevating, the least pretentiousness, the least pretentiousness, the least procrastination, and the least foggy words. , The least pretentious, the least nagging, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least going round and round, the least piling up flowery empty words, the least secretive, the least nagging, the least obscure, the least confusing with incomprehensible terminology, the least going round and round to tell you, it looks good.

🤔Comment first and then continue reading. The male protagonist is INTP, rational and insightful. The heroine is ISFP, emotional and has strong observation skills. This is a highly complementary pair. In short, I like to watch scenes involving the interaction between male and female protagonists. I would like to mention some minor shortcomings here. If the author can correct them, more people will read it. This is the problem with the first three chapters. I don't know why I always want to fast forward while watching it. I just feel like I haven't gotten into the theme. Whether it's plot foreshadowing or description modification, it's too easy to fast forward. Simply put, the turning point comes very slowly. Of course, I am fast forwarding, but other people who are impatient will just stop watching it? This is a philosophical question. If a lot of people read the first three chapters, then just pretend I didn't say anything. If a lot of people don't read it, then you should consider streamlining and adding turning points. This is my personal opinion. After the first three chapters, I rarely fast forward starting from the fourth chapter. I hope that the exciting content later will not be affected by these small problems in the first three chapters. 😂The follow-up is getting more and more exciting. I originally thought the first part was good, but now it seems like an appetizer. After watching the whole process, there is no cliché plot, full of sweetness, and logical logic. I think this book will become popular sooner or later.

Humorous but not vulgar, casual but not procrastinating. The male protagonist is very rational and the female protagonist is brave, but the description of the school beauty is not vivid enough. A bookworm of twenty years, my favorite story, and my favorite hero and heroine.

Recently, I have been impatient and read a lot of low-scoring novels. This is one of the best works that I have seen in these days and in my whole life of reading. Although some parts are too fantasy and coincidental, as a youth campus novel, it is really great. Come on, author.

I just got into the book and haven't read much. So far, it's actually more in line with my taste in reading. What do you think of this book? So far, many of the supporting characters and protagonists have their own story lines, which show the character's personality and uniqueness. What I feel is the extra point is the character of the male protagonist. Tentatively, I will reward 10 yuan for four stars. I will talk about it later because I am unhappy😄 How to say it? Personally speaking, I really don't have any opinions on this book at the end, and I can't say that. Anyway, I don't really like Gu Hengyuan as a prodigal, but he is not like ordinary people. I can only say that the author's portrayal was very successful. Although I won't hate it, I don't like it either. I don't know what the author will write in the later stage. In the end, it was he who impressed Shen Zhiwei or Wada Coco in the future, or even the other characters who appeared, it always felt that it was not so unsatisfactory. The same goes for the male protagonist, and even now there is a childhood sweetheart. At present, the attitude is that they want to compete. Although I haven't watched it yet, judging from this posture, it is estimated that there will be a bloody plot. In fact, to be honest, there is nothing wrong with writing it like this, because writing a book that can focus on the emotional line is generally not so easy to do, it needs to add some twists and other things. Overall, it's pretty good, but I personally understand and respect it, but I don't agree with it. Reading is just for happiness, so let the story end here and follow the current established trajectory and think of a good ending for them. I only saw this part, and the evaluation is only for this part, so I'll keep it four stars.

The writing is very good, and the ending of the drama is also very good. I thought it would just pass by normally, but time goes by so fast, I feel like I have finished reading the book directly. This kind of writing is more immersive.

The author must have read a lot of Japanese comics. I saw many shadows of Harmono, Passerby Heroine, etc. However, the story is very well written. It only borrows some characters, but the result is still different.

Damn it, how can people be so good at writing? I will always follow Da Da💕💕. It's so pure love written, so touching😘Say it again [punch out] pure love is invincible