HP: The Light of Polaris

The writing is good, the characters are well set, and the plot is great. I love this book! 1. Writing style: The author has said that he particularly likes the translation of Ma Aixin and Ma Ainong. Probably because of this, the writing style is particularly close to the original translation. At the same time, there are also some clever jokes about the Weasley family and other characters from time to time, which are exactly the same as the cold humor of the original work. When reading, you feel like you are reading the original work. 2. Character design: There is no OOC at all. Take Draco, for example, he was a stinky daddy boy in the early stage. Even after he grew up quickly in the sixth grade, he had no ability to "do big things". Therefore, except for the sixth grade, Draco in this article is basically free from the main line of fighting against Voldemort. In addition, even the seventh grade, because his character and ability are indeed not able to do some big actions, such as taking the lead in resistance, etc., So these things are mainly done by Praris. Of course, Draco also discovered the specialty of alchemy under the guidance of Praris, which has grown a lot compared to the original work. In fact, I have also questioned that Praris is already perfect, so why did she fall in love with Draco, who has almost no outstanding abilities except his appearance. The author also told the answer later. What Praris lacks is the ability to love, and Draco, a person who has been pampered by his parents since childhood, can give her unreserved love. This kind of emotion is still very touching. Another thing that impressed me deeply was the handling of the relationship between the snake and the lion. Because the story unfolds from the perspective of Prayris, a Slytherin, it will inevitably make people think that Gryffindors are reckless and biased, but it is not deliberately smeared. After all, the snake and lion students have their own shortcomings [laughs]. Later on, Prayris also saw the courage of Gryffindor and was moved. Moreover, the author did not clear Snape's name. The article mentioned that Praris understood Harry's hatred for Snape, which was determined by Snape's attitude towards Gryffindor towards him. It is really commendable that Snape was not completely cleansed because of his preference for Slytherin. I personally feel that if he was completely cleansed, it would be a denial of Snape, a complex character. 3. Plot: The daily plot in the early stage is very good, making the friendship and love after the war very touching. I personally like the friendship between the four girls in the Slytherin dormitory and the friendship between Praris and Hermione. It is really gratifying to watch them from the unilateral guidance and help of Praris to the spiritual support and companionship of Praris later! I especially like the seventh-grade plot at the end. The school life that was briefly mentioned in the original work allows us to see another side of the story, and the supporting characters in the original work also shine with a different brilliance. I wrote so much without realizing it. I really like it. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good story!

Judging from the current plot, it is pretty good. The students of Slytherin all have their own unique characters, such as Millicent's handling of friends and family conflicts; Pansy's confusion about self-worth; Daphne's "unruly"; Prayris's cleverness and near-demon; everyone in Diagon Alley's love for Pray; Slytherin's silent treatment of children's mistakes; Professor Sprout's motherly love; and Flint and others... They are no longer just passerby NPCs, but have their own personalities. The perspective chosen was that of Slytherin, and he did not interfere too much with the three protagonists. He was more of a silent guesser than a blind licker. I hope that the follow-up can maintain its characteristics, and silently hope that the period of teaching will have a good ending.

Super Invincible is explosive and beautiful, the original characters are three-dimensional, the original characters are not OOC, and the storyline has ups and downs. It is my top HP fan! This is a book that can bring people a lot of thinking and inspiration! I really, really like the character of Pule. She made me get to know Slytherin again. She is a Slytherin but her stance is biased towards the Order of the Phoenix. It is always easy to appear in similar novels, but it does not appear at all in this book! It is obvious that Pule is a Slytherin, but her kindness and her cherishing of love are also obvious. She is smart and talented, but not superior. She is the master of power, not a slave. To be honest, her final action of destroying the potion really surprised me. It was not until I saw the beginning of the second brush that she called her magic "devil" that I finally understood it. At this point, I saw the shadow of Dumbledore in her, which also touched me very much.

A wonderful HP fanfic, so good that I thought it was a paid novel. The heroine has a unique design. There is no plug-in such as opening a game system, but she has a brain similar to Sherlock Holmes. Although he had an unfortunate childhood, he was raised very well after entering Hogwarts, and gradually blossomed into a North Star-like brilliance. He established many bonds, both in terms of family ties (some of the older generation people who care about the heroine are not related by blood, but I call them family ties when it comes to love), and in terms of friendship. The protagonist's soul is as shining as a star. Although the world has given her suffering, she treats the world with a warm heart. Who can reject a person who is strong and smart on the surface but is actually kind and warm? I can't. Yes that's right I'm in love with her. The other character creations in the original drama in the article are also very suitable, and Si Jiao is especially outstanding. Every time I see Si Jiao spraying venom, I feel like, wow! It's so cool to scold! But it must be difficult to write, it's a long and difficult sentence to curse people. I read the Goblet of Fire chapter in one sitting, and I really enjoyed it more and more. A perfect fan worthy of daily updates! Please stick to it until the end [love], because your writing is really beautiful.

The writing is very good, unlike most Slytherin heroines who are not malicious towards Gryffindor, and they don't have any powerful background or golden fingers. The protagonist's IQ is online. But I like to collect articles, so, see you when it's finished. It's so good! One of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen! I love it so much, the heroine is amazing! Not the bully Slytherin in traditional fan fiction! Connotative, well-educated, and extremely smart!

It's so good. The writing can be ranked in the top three among Tomato HP fans (personal reading history judgment). Although it is currently very short, the content is very exciting. It understands friendship from another angle, not just a simple friendship, but it is indeed the most touching. The male and female protagonists also have a very good cp feeling. The logic of the whole article is also very smooth. At least I did not find any big bugs. The plot is smooth and the characters are also very good. I like it very much. Thank you for your love. I hope you can stick with me. Thank you very much.

To be honest, the quality of this book is really high. The plot is smooth and the protagonist has a three-dimensional and distinct image. He is a qualified Slytherin, but he is not completely addicted to it. He is a very charismatic person.

It's really super beautiful, [sending heart] [sending heart] [admiration] [admiration] although the content is still a little short. But who knows, every time the heroine speaks. The analysis and thinking, as well as the content of the article, are all like Snape narrating, and there is a sense of ridicule in every paragraph! It makes people laugh and feel comfortable after reading it. There is a kind of satisfying and well-founded feeling of making complaints [full] [full] [full]! It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]! So I tied it! ! Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The child is hungry and out of food! Much faster and faster [please ask for more explosive updates] [please seek more explosive updates] [please seek more explosive updates]! I hope it ends smoothly and I don't want any eunuchs! Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is the best HP fanfic I have ever read so far. The author describes each character very carefully, and each character has their own inner monologue. The author also writes that Slytherin is not cold-blooded, Narcissa loves her son eagerly, and is willing to take the blame for Draco. Winnie also loves Pule, and she will even apply to a foreign magic school for Pule. Pansy and Daphne are not as arrogant and rude as in other novels. They will also treat their friends and family sincerely. It is really beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful.

Just looking at the cover, I would never have guessed that it was such a high-quality work! Super well written! ! The logic of Meibao's reasoning process can stand up to scrutiny. I feel that I am a person with particularly strong reasoning ability! Gives people a sense of security! Smart and reassuring! The characters are all well-written, and the relationship between the younger sister and her best friends is also very real! It is one of the few articles I have read that describes Slytherin's daily fights and bickering rather than one-sided portrayal of other Slytherin characters!