Re: The Street Loafer of the Hand That Remakes

Spawning (yes, you read that right), who urges updates these days? The author makes a kid for everyone to play with. If it makes everyone cry, they say it's the author's fault. The author is a bad guy. Anyway, urging can't push for a new chapter. Maybe if it's done, you'll get red envelopes, and there's still a kid to tease. Please update me quickly [angry] (screaming) (dark) (twisted) (crawling). It will really kill you if you don't have a book to read.

Self-evaluation, Some friends may think that the entire chapter of the first volume is the original plot, which is not interesting. This should really be noted. In the following words, the author's idea is to mainly add original content, but the overall plot direction is still loyal to the game [Sending Hearts] —— The author's initial idea was to consider when reading the plot how to make some changes in 1929, such as rescuing Marianne in advance, and whether there would be any butterfly effect changes in subsequent events. Based on this idea, I started writing. [Understood][Understood] The main core of this book in terms of setting is that outside of the game plot, the protagonist moves as he pleases in unnoticed corners, participating in and changing some minor subplots in his own way, making the ending of the game more satisfying. [Thinking] Finally, everyone is welcome to comment. Sometimes you may not pay attention and there will be one or two typos, just @ and I will make corrections carefully. [Blowing kiss]

Five-star rating From an objective point of view, this book is still very good, the plot is reasonable and orderly, and the characters are quite rich. It's just that the updates are a bit slow, but everything else is very good [Like][Like][Like]

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It is better to read this book with the music "Green Citrus" The author made it purely by hand, without any AI flavor. The plot design and character dialogue do not deviate from the 1999 worldview or OOC. There are some little things in the article, which are quite interesting. The male protagonist's IQ is online, his emotional intelligence depends on his mood, and his strength can defeat 99% of his enemies, but not Long Aotian. The heroine Snyder is a sweet and delicious clementine, and her character is the same as in the plot, but she didn't collapse anyway. The interaction between the young couple is like a Manchu-Han banquet. Those who have regrets about their deceased wife can come and have a look. It's all sugar without ice. The location of Greco's orchard is not good, so the oranges are a bit bitter. Of course, the oranges in the candied haws don't need to be very good, as long as they have short hair, red eyes, a suit jacket, and a red feather skirt.

The character creation is consistent with the original work. The author's characterization is meticulous and meticulous. Snyder's character creation is very good. It is like the character's autobiography. The character's personality is full and vivid, which perfectly fits the original setting of "Back to the Future 1999". The details of the character are described with care. All the characters have three-dimensional images, the emotional sweetness is sufficient, and pure love heals. It is a high-quality pure love sweet story. The relationship between the protagonist and Snyder is gradual, hidden in the subtle details, and is implicit and ambiguous. The writing is smooth, has no obvious poisonous points, has a strong sense of atmosphere, and the plot is clear and coherent. It closely follows the main line of the original work and fills in the blanks of the original plot. It is very suitable for revisiting the plot and continues to be updated steadily. [Crying] [crying] [crying], I have been smoking more than 60 for a year and a half, Xiao Rui is 129.

The book is very nice. The protagonist and Snyder are very sweet and get along very well. But I think the only flaw of this book is that the young master named Du was bullied in school and nothing happened, and then the incident ended with his father being hospitalized. How did you feel after seeing this? Just like you are eating sweets, and suddenly someone slaps you, which makes you very angry. This candy stopped being sweet instantly. Then you can't do anything about him. However, aside from this small episode, the whole book is still very sweet.

I give it a five-star rating and hope it will continue to be updated, but I also need to write about the emotional drama. After all, it is a single female protagonist, and the relationship was confirmed in more than 100 chapters. My evaluation is that this book can be at least 8.0, But no matter how many people wrote it in 1999, not many people read it. Because Vertin is essentially a woman, this game is equivalent to girls posting, so not many people read it.

My orangery team! Why did you want to dismantle the Orangery Group! [Cry][cry][cry]

It's rare among Yaojiujiu fan fiction that the plot line is relatively clear without looking at it! ! ! Just push it and hope the author doesn't die. I also watched it rise from 7.6 To 7.9, Which is really amazing! ? ! Keep up the good work, author, I will always support you!