Who Unsealed the Female Demon Lord?

Read them all in one go. . I just hope it doesn't end like the last book. Others said it didn't look good at the later stage of the book. I feel okay. It's just that the ending was too rushed. I hope the author will be faster.

I like this plot (although I have just started writing it now haha) [laughing evilly] It feels even better than the author's previous book that stayed in the game world [laughing evilly] The author's writing skills are more mature [laughing evilly] [love] Although I have only written a few chapters now [laughing crookedly], I still want to support it by giving it a five-star rating [laughing crookedly] I hope the author can keep writing [laughing crookedly] [love]

It has a beginning and an end, and the writing is decent. Although it's short, it's a substantial and complete story. It's not bad. The characteristic is that the whole plot runs on two lines. This is really good. Basically, there will be no conflict between the emotional line and the main plot. The simultaneous development at the same time is quite well written in terms of control. In terms of the relationship between the male and female protagonists... In fact, the previous rhythm is correct. It is impossible for a strong person to fall in love with a mortal so quickly. The change in the middle is actually accelerated because of the short length. However, the birth of the eldest daughter is quite reasonable. The main plot is actually focused on the case, and then connected together with a line. The overall logic is passable. In addition, the modern, systematic and commercial setting of cultivating immortals is quite interesting. All in all, it's a good book. It's quite short and worth reading.

After looking at a few pictures, there is a bug. That is to say, there has been a gap in the world of cultivation for 3,000 years, which makes them unclear about the strength of the heroine. So since there is a gap, why can the seventh-ranked old man pass on the sword with the soul of his ancestors? Doesn't this mean there are no gaps?

After reading a few pictures, the first thing I thought of was to write about a person who is more powerful than the heroine, but he doesn't care about anything. Even if the universe is destroyed, he won't care. He is just watching the show.

Who broke the seal of the female devil? Buy meat and feed it with egg yolks Relatively fresh ideas, some average plots, and not very vivid characters. Three to four stars. New book seedlings, rounded up.

Opened a new book. It feels pretty good now. I hope it won't be as explosive as Song Ye's book It feels very strange and not too toxic, but I can't read it and it's boring.

There is a faint joy

This is my first book, I hope the author can use his strengths and avoid weaknesses

Good looking author, keep up the good work