A Mortal’s Path to Immortality: I Advance with My Female Clone

(See Chapter 34 of the Foundation Building of the Original Body) The avatar has its own subjective consciousness, emotions and independent initiative. The primary and secondary relationships are like the roots and leaves of the tree, and it is also a mixture of family and master and disciple. It is not so much an immortal as it is a knight, not a Jingu, but a lineage of Liang Yusheng. The writing is more accurate and smooth, but the three protagonists lack fullness and distinction. The story direction and plot progression are a bit rough, but there are no big problems. If you like it, it is a good story.

In half a month, his cultivation has steadily improved from the early stage of the second level of Qi training to the middle stage of the second level of Qi training. The cultivation base has steadily improved from the middle of the seventh level of Qi training to the late stage of the seventh level of Qi training. There should be a high probability that there will be an early stage, a middle stage, a late stage, a half-step peak, and a peak 🤦

It's not the first time I've seen this type of thing, but the clones are very interesting and novel, so it's a good point to watch. But it would be a bit cliché if you are always avatars. You can write between various avatars and try to connect them in series. It is mainly written on the corresponding forces. You can add some settings in practice. It would be better to have more contradictions and the separation of life and death. If the author has his own ideas and wants to work at his own pace, although there are some shortcomings, the flaws cannot be concealed.

I think it's pretty good. Regardless of whether it is an AI or a real person, I have seen some people say it is an AI, but I really don't have any traces of it being an AI, and the writing is indeed good. Then, as for whether to stop updating or not, it's up to you. It's indeed pretty good-looking, if I think so. It would be interesting if this AI could write this kind of work.

It's just too much regret, give it five stars. It's because I watched it and Lu Qingyao was too miserable. I didn't even come out.

Very interesting idea [laughing] The way of writing conflict is too cliche 😂

The emotion is written very well, but some sentence patterns are a bit repetitive.

Interesting, hahaha Look at me and feel a little distressed

It's okay, there are relatively few clones

There are too many regrets. It's very beautiful and unique.