Genshin Impact: Players Think I’m Evil, So I’ll Answer with My Blade

It's good to watch. Although the original protagonist, who is also the screen, is indeed bitter and hateful from the perspective of the screen, the author has found a new way to turn the Xumi people into actors and let us complete the contrast with the original protagonist's perspective from a behind-the-scenes perspective. The addition of the behind-the-scenes life story makes the rhythm relatively relaxed and creates a sense of pleasure. In addition, the player discussion like a live barrage strengthens the contrast between the screen perspective plot and other plots, allowing the pleasure to continue to increase. Well, it's not my place to say this and just say: It looks good! ! When I choose between Bai Shanmei and Heishencan, no one will suffer (except the doctor), but Meng Guren (Ying) feels like I can't do anything! Nothing can be changed! Powerless

The float bumped and bumped, Nasida was really eye-opening. Nasida's birthday, she said, was today. Qiuhan takes her everywhere to play Nasida, you need to grow up quickly. The Flower Goddess's birthday festival began, and people circled around her happy day. The float bumped and bumped, and Nacida opened her eyes. She said it was just like a dream, Because I will never see another celebration without him.

It's rare to seriously evaluate a novel. The author can tell that the writing power of the plot is still enough and the content is worth reading. I personally think that if I continue to write and polish this novel, I can get a rating of 8.8 Or above. But there are some issues I still want to talk about. First of all, it can be seen that it is similar to the type of interaction with reality, but there are already many successful templates for reference in this area (the first ones are "Too Real" and "Unfathomable" by Morning Star), and the author seems to start writing without real interaction. There are many key factors, such as there is usually a character who has a great influence in reality who is responsible for interpreting new announcements, character settings, etc. To help the protagonist complete the world view (although everyone is familiar with it, the private setting still needs to be supplemented), because asking the protagonist from another world to explain it in a long inner monologue will seem stupid and procrastinating. There is also the sudden appearance of [ ] wrapped barrage, which reflects that the author has not mastered the rhythm of switching between reality and another world. At the same time, there is too much barrage content. I flipped through it and found that the author can write 4-5 pages of barrage, and there is no excessive plot in the middle. It seems that 4-5 pages of barrages that have nothing to do with the plot are suddenly inserted into the plot and then enter the plot. I was confused when I saw it. All in all, I hope the author will continue to polish the work. The content written is logical and reasonable, and it is worth reading. After seeing the later parts, there are a lot of changes. The author is still good.

A Genshin Impact fanfic of quite good quality. He even gave me a story about a traveler who borrowed troops from the Three Kingdoms to attack the Order Academy when the protagonist was not a traveler. It's really beyond my imagination. The plot is also connected one after another. It is quite comfortable to watch it in one go. I highly recommend it!

Well, I just came to see the knives [smile] It may be a bit unkind, but I am still looking forward to Qiu Han's knives. So far, they are very good and to my taste.

Too old, not enough

Em, how should I put it, I have read 5 to 60 chapters of the book, and it is too inconsistent. Maybe I don't like this kind of thing, but I also wish the author will get better and better♡´･ᴗ･`♡

It's good to watch, the plot is exciting, and the protagonist's character is also very interesting. There are a lot of descriptions of scenery, but the protagonist seems to be white-washed and stiff in the eyes of the audience and the screen, as if they believed in the protagonist instantly. The transition could be strengthened. I feel like this episode is almost over, so let's watch the movie after the knife is over. Oh [almost crying]

Chapter 19 There is currently a feeling that the barrage can be reduced a bit. Let's put it this way, in the previous Unofficial History of Teyvat, the first barrage did not promote the current plot, and deleting it later will not affect it. Also, what will happen after 3 consecutive unofficial histories? No, it's just three unofficial stories, and it feels like it separates the previous paragraphs. Others can be said to be passing or above.

If I were a traveler I would explode, but I am a reader [shy][shy]