Genshin Impact: I Made Players Cry, Then My Revenue Hit a Billion

Very nice sweet article, reminds me of the famous saying of a certain black mute "It hurts, you are the only one for me." "I want nothing but you." "Painful, you have been faithfully accompanying me, and you have not changed at all until now." "While my soul wanders at the bottom of the abyss." "How can I blame you?" "Painful, you will never escape from my side." "I'm finally able to express my respect for you." "Now I recognize your existence." "And you are already so beautiful just by existing in this world." "Pain, you are like that person who never left the hearth of my poor heart." "You will get inside me." "Lie down next to me." The author will update soon [laughing]

It's a new book. I've read the first volume so far and it's pretty good. I'll support it with four stars. I'll wait and see. I'll review it later. If it's well written, I'll change it to five stars. Let's talk about the advantages first. The image of the protagonist really impressed me. He is a white-haired man with long hair, and Mo Mo is the best among the best. In terms of personality, he is the kind of cold-blooded male god when we first meet him. When he cuts it off, he is a free and easy swordsman. The writing of Bai Yuan's recollection is pretty good and very delicate. It should be free of cp, which is pretty good. Then let's talk about some problems. First of all, it can be seen that the author's writing style is still a little immature, and the plot coherence is okay, but the transition of memories is a bit stiff. The protagonist's presence in the plot is a little too big, and the main plot has also been changed. It's not that it's bad, but maybe I'm not used to it yet. Secondly, I personally like to read descriptions of the main character's appearance. The author has many descriptions, more than in the male videos, and slightly less than in the female videos. The repetition rate of appearance descriptions is a bit high, and it is a bit embarrassing to be in between the male videos and the female videos. The last point is that this book seems to be an invincible text? It's not that Invincible novels are bad, but the audience for this type of novel is actually shrinking. In addition, the identity of the protagonist is not a demon (of course, if the protagonist has a hidden identity, I didn't say orz), the book is getting longer and longer, and people will gradually lose interest. The specific development will wait for a big update. Regarding the barrage forum, I suggest you actually write a few more paragraphs of plot before writing the forum together. Although the structure check rate for similar articles is as high as 99%, since most of them are written this way, it shows that this structure is more acceptable. The current situation of this book is that the interval between writing the forum and writing the main text is slightly shorter, and the insertion is a bit abrupt. It is just my personal feeling that it is better to follow the idea. Finally it is! Good luck to the author, I hope there will be no interruption in updates. There are not many Genshin Impact novels of the same type that are still being serialized. It's hard to find them. If nothing happens, I will continue to follow them. In fact, we could use more knives. After all, the memory chapter is still around the 1,000th year of the protagonist's time travel. There are still 5,000 years left (please, I want to eat the protagonist's battle damage! Orz) The author gives you a lot of support [Send heart][Send heart]

I can finish it if I can't pick any more. Generally speaking, there is no big problem. It's just that the first two chapters contain too much real-life descriptions and the protagonist's role is a bit small. No big problem. It's pretty good for a refreshing article. It really made me happy to read it. It's good to read [shy] The sea, you are all water. To be honest, the protagonist has too few roles. I might as well just play Genshin Impact. Generally speaking, the description of the protagonist is enough and there are a lot of plots in the original work. I have read the novel, which means that I know the general plot. I just came to see if the protagonist of your novel can break the knife. Can you let me watch it? But you just showed me the original plot. There is so little plot about the protagonist.

When the author writes, can he write one section without plot, and then write the plot again, and also mix in comments, which is just to mix up the word count? It is recommended to delete the purely plot comments and change them to plot-mixed comments, so that the number of comments will be reduced. (When the author was portraying the protagonist, I felt that the protagonist did not have the heaviness of 6,000 years. I hope the author can change it.) The overall idea is still okay, but since Teyvat is already invincible, I have to fix the previous knives, right? [Smile] (Key point: If you don't do it, you will suffer a big loss)

𓀃𓀅𓀇 The author's soul is back! The beacon in the southern sky is blazing, and the black armor covers the sky. The thunder-driving car splits the sky, and the light chases the tail of the comet! 𓀌𓀎𓀠 The author's soul is back! Looking back over the ice mountain, I see a golden frosty moon. Shoot Sirius into Beichenye, the sound of dysprosium is like a complaint! 𓀋𓀌𓀎 The author's soul is back! The sand in the West Pole is swallowed up, and the bronze lord burns into the night. Stepping on the tortoise-shell song and Yu's steps, the star map is in the palm of your hand! 𓀋𓀠𓀤 The author's soul is back! Looking to the east, the hibiscus trees are burning, and the red crows hold the pei in their heads. After nine days of carving the remains, he made a chariot, and Xihe gave him the bridle! 𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back! Forge weapons into bells! The soul is back! Where the bones are buried, a golden harvest grows!

Wanderer from afar, you are a poor person who has no home like me. My real name is Ben Jiesun, and the world calls me Thief Demon Lord. In fact, I am just a wanderer who wants to go home. This world is like a desperate cage. If you also want to go home, then accept this gift from me. I believe he can definitely help you, but if you want to return home, you have to rely on your own efforts. In addition, the name of this gift is Gui Bujue "A lonely boat rises in the desert, and the stars are scattered, and a lonely soul in the sky is heartbroken." "I am a guest of reincarnation, I don't know where to talk to Sangma." "The sea of stars is so vast that it cuts off the silver man, and the empty door is long and thoughtful." "Traveling thousands of miles to find your way back, searching for your homeland across all eternity" "Manpower is limited and heaven is endless, leave it until you are destined to start again"

I just read a little bit, and the new book has ratings. It's still pretty good. It's about the same level as Beng Tie's Qin Zhou. I'll give it a high score. Speaking of whether to save the lady, I think it would be better to die once and then pull her out. A Yuan's part is perfect, I really like it. This part is no worse than the emotional line between Qiu Bai and Xianyun in The Yin Yang Demon.

Nice looking, love watching How wonderful that the sky and the earth actually hang upside down. The sky becomes smaller and the earth becomes larger. It is strange. No one helps me achieve my goals, so I walk on the snow to the top of the mountain. If you are not lucky enough, you can climb Kunlun alone. Hard times can't take away your ambition, but you will eventually succeed if you don't die. The wind and snow have weighed on me for two or three years, but I smiled at the wind as light as snow. I still have great ambitions in my heart, and one day I will reach the top and laugh at the sky. When success and fame are achieved, Coptis chinensis can also be eaten raw to make it sweet.

I've watched it all, it's safe and knife-free, the overall plot is good, but I feel like there are too many adjectives to describe the plot.

Children don't have knives, so you can watch with confidence👀