The Dark Moonlight Is Full of Lies

Friends, please note that this article contains a lot of elements: heartthrob, Mary Sue, old-fashioned bad blood, paranoia, psychosis, revenge, madness and other elements. All the characters are villains, and all the characters who appear have their own dark sides. As for our heroine, she is not a good person according to universal values, but she is not a pure evil person either. I want to write about the feeling of "hypocrisy but also a hint of sincerity", but I don't know if my writing skills can achieve it. This is the second novel the author has tried to write, but it is the first one in which all background characters are original. I hope it can be completed well~ BTW: If you like to read about the heartthrob Shura Chang Xiong's competition, you can go to my homepage. There is a completed drama that meets the above requirements ~ It's very fat 70W+ Finally, thank you all for your patience and support~

Let's talk about this book 1. Character design: First of all, the heroine of this book is a very attractive girl. She is not a show-off heartthrob like most of the Tomato novels I have read. To put it simply, she is a woman who can make me bend. Secondly, the male protagonists of this book each have their own characteristics and charms. Unlike other Tomato novels I have read, most of them only made me feel that one word is domineering, but the male protagonist of this book can be said to have it all, a violent maniac, a control freak, and a white and black man. 2. Plot: The plot also made me think it was very logical. Every foreshadowing and everything the heroine did would allow me to see the corresponding results later. Moreover, the emotional lines between the heroine and the male protagonists did not make me feel inexplicable, nor did it make me feel that it was a refreshing article. The author treated me as a person and did not treat me as a fool. 3. Three views: Although the author said that everyone is evil, I think this is a thoughtful article and the three views are normal. It can be summed up in one word, cool

Super pretty! ! I have read a lot of this kind of novels and discarded a lot [laughing and crying] but I think this one is attractive to readers. First of all, the heroine and the male protagonists are portrayed very well! ! I think this is not easy. Nowadays, novels are written too quickly. The characters have entered the emotional line before they are clear. [Read carefully] Although the heroine is introduced as an evil girl, her confession and thoughts are obviously not a single evil. She is flesh and blood. People themselves are complex. There is no simple good or bad. I prefer it. I like a heroine like this~ Secondly, the emotional and career lines are very good, step by step, there is no so-called love at first sight or a big show at the beginning. Some novels start with an intimate scene. The heroine can stand it, but the readers can't stand it [vomit]. Moreover, the heroine is slow to feelings, or more accurately, she is self-absorbed. This is very attractive to me! ! She is very smart and will consider her own interests first in everything, so she will subconsciously ignore the feelings of the male protagonists towards her. A strong self-awareness and a weak emotional side form a closed loop, so the female protagonist has established [admiration]. Currently, I feel that none of the male protagonists are worthy of her, haha, but the author tells the characters and experiences of each male protagonist very well! ! Crazy criticism also requires background and experience, hahaha. The behavior of each male protagonist is not inconsistent with their character, and will cause doubts and suspicions about the female protagonist. Especially the large text has a sense of substitution, and there is no watery writing style! ! I have seen very few good articles on 🍅, but I am very optimistic about you! ! I leave the characters to you, I believe you can shape them well, and I look forward to the next plot direction [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

The heroine is scheming but kind-hearted (with a certain purpose), knows how to build a good relationship with the original heroine, treats herself as an outsider, brings together the original heroine and the two protagonists in the ED, and works hard to conquer the young master Gong in the ED. However, as the plot progresses, she unknowingly gets entangled with the three male protagonists. The character of the heroine is well portrayed, not an evil scheming one, but a refreshing scheming that makes people feel comfortable, have a good impression, and like her🥰🥰🥰! ! ! The author's writing is very consistent with the heroine in my mind, but it is a bit too little and not enough to read. I hope the author will update it more! ! !

So far, it's quite good-looking, both have brains, and the heroine is thoughtful. I like the plot and the heroine very much. I just have a small suggestion, can you shorten the inner monologue a little bit? Everyone has a long monologue. The plot seems to unfold very slowly, and sometimes you don't know where the previous plot is going after reading the monologue. Although this will highlight that each character is three-dimensional and intelligent, the large amount of monologue analysis will make me think that I am watching Detective Conan. I keep reasoning [love] [love] [love] [love]

The heroine is vicious with a hint of integrity, and only does things that are beneficial to herself. She is a beautiful and charming poppy~ When her brother first appeared, I thought he had an unruly character, but later I thought he was a cute puppy. (I hope it can be orthopedics, it really smells good, hehe [admiration]) Of the three male protagonists I have contacted so far, one is irritable, one is yandere, and one has indescribable feelings (from the Gong family) I hope there won't be so many female supporting characters hanging around the male protagonists. It would be more fragrant with some lily~

I finished reading it in one go. I really like the character of the heroine. The heroine is not a good person but she has her own views and principles. She is not a black and white script that is very cliche. The male protagonist also has his own position. You can see all kinds of extreme push and pull. It is really beautiful.

It's rare to see a story about a Mary Sue aristocratic campus written so wonderfully. Hahahaha. I'm looking forward to the following plots. A small request: I hope the author can speed up the emotional line a little bit, I can't wait! ! 🥰🥰

When I first read it, I thought the writing was pretty good and quite emotional. Later, maybe because of the break in updates, or because I haven't read it for a while, but then I started to feel very bland and uninteresting. The ending was a bit rushed, the death of the big boss was a bit sloppy, and the forced ending was a bit bland. But the logic is pretty good, it's reasonable, and it doesn't specifically highlight any plot. For example, the story line of Yu Green Tea written in the extra chapter is quite normal [please taste it carefully]. Of course, there are two extra chapters that are not written. If you include the younger brother, there are three [Love] ] Although I have already written about the stock I am standing on (I love the energy of green tea so much, and there is a hint of sincerity in my pretense of standing on them from the beginning), I am still looking forward to the other few episodes. If the other two episodes are out, please remember to kick me. I feel like I'm driving too high and driving too low, and I still feel uncomfortable looking at it later.

I was fascinated by what I read yesterday. The heroine is not a weak little white rabbit, nor is she an ordinary person who works hard, but the campus chaebol is also divided into levels. She knows exactly what she wants. The description of the heroine's appearance is also very eye-catching. I have been liking this type of book recently. What I like most is the author's writing style and the speed of typing. I really love this kind of book.