The Red Maple Immortal Clan

Give yourself a five-star [eating melon]. The pace of this family story will be slow, focusing on the portrayal of group portraits and the growth of the protagonist and his family. Without Goldfinger or Grandpa, the protagonist's talent would be better, and he would strive to write about the ups and downs and struggles of a small family on the road to growth. The combat power is rigorous, and the protagonist does not travel through time, so there will be a growth process of a young character. The early stage may be dull, but I will try my best to write a full plot, including everyone in the family, and they will have their own roles. In addition, there will not be a situation where the entire clan sucks the blood of the protagonist. (I always believe that a family is made up of individuals, and everyone has their own opportunities. Everything cannot belong to the family. For example, some novels give people the feeling that if they pick up ten spiritual stones on the ground, they would like to hand them over to the whole family for distribution. The protagonist is a golden elixir monk who wants to build foundation spiritual objects for his children. It all seems to have to be approved by the clan, which is called fairness. Don't you have any property of your own? Also, every move seems to be arranged by the family. I don't think this is reasonable, because a few people want to go out on their own, and this has to be allowed.) The family is not the Supreme Emperor, and the clan members are not slaves of the family. Some of the above unflattering situations will not occur. I listen to your advice, and I will also adopt readers' good suggestions. After all, personal power is always small! [Laugh]

Although there are a few flaws, it is still very good. The writing is fluent and the plot is reasonable, but there are some foreshadowings that can be seen at a glance, and it doesn't feel like it is like that! @

There's nothing particularly poisonous about it. It's a good source of food.

The writing is good, the main line is clear, and the logic is reasonable.

Not bad. Among the novels about family cultivating immortals that I have read, they are considered average.

Not bad, my favorite type, not so much pretentiousness

Good, keep up the good work. !

It doesn't feel like a group portrait, but it's pretty cool [laughs]

It's really well written, I recommend it.

A very good novel, vivid and interesting, with flesh and blood, this is what we also yearn for