The Baiyun Lin Clan

It's a good-looking story about a family cultivating immortals who plays with swords. It seems to have a single heroine. It's also well written.

So far, it seems that overall it is a well-written novel, but there are a few things I would like to ask the author; 1. Does Siha want to express the meaning of snakes making sounds? If it feels unnecessary, it is a bit awkward to read anyway. 2. I feel that this is also a common problem of most Tomato Cultivation authors. The description of the fight is not satisfactory. Does the protagonist just use a small sky sword formation every time he fights and then it is over? I hope that in the future, the author will strengthen the description of various moves between the protagonist and other people, and I also hope that the author will continue to do so [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Although the writing is a bit novice, the plot arrangement is still very good. As a novice, it is a good book. I hope that future works will be better.

It's still very good, why doesn't anyone rate it?

Good, good, good, good, good, good The author writes very well, very wonderfully

It's okay, but the author is a bit short

The subject matter is good, pig's feet are alchemists, but there is a lack of planting space. Pig's feet must have a hanging place, right?

So pretty, so pretty

There is nothing poisonous about it at the moment. Write it well and try to update it at least twice a day. This book should become popular. Come on!

There's nothing toxic about the beginning of the plot, so far it's okay