Junior Uncle's Four Rules for Fighting: Fast, Precise, Ruthless, Steady

It's a bit baffling whether it looks good or not. First: Thirty years of information wouldn't be so closed-off, right? Do you really think you won't leak anything? The heroine is also speechless. She is not accusing them of unjustly accusing people of their true intentions and telling them why, why, haha, shut up and stop talking. Second: Maybe the background of this book is a bit unacceptable. In the mortal world, no matter whether it was an orthodox immortal cultivator or not, wouldn't those who killed innocent people indiscriminately and harmed other people's lives be killed? This novel only states that the mortal world is the mortal world, and the world of immortality is the world of immortality. The world of immortality is not allowed to interfere with human affairs in the mortal world. Deaths and injuries in fights between the two countries, or in the struggle for power, even in business wars, are all normal things, and the heroine will definitely not do it. But what did the heroine encounter? Isn't it wrong for powerful people to kill innocent people indiscriminately so that people can continue to live in water and fire? Third: Lin Wanqing's collusion with the heroine Moxiu was not revealed, and the writing was all about the big level with little attention to the details of the small level. Time passed quickly in the frame, and the female major's salary rose very quickly, which is useless (personal feeling) Fourth: As a young master, the heroine feels that no one respects the heroine in the early stage. With such an awesome master, no one knows the name of his apprentice? No one thinks that way? Even when the heroine revealed her identity, she didn't appear to be respectful. Fifth: In my opinion, the people killed by the heroine, whether it was massacre of the city or extermination of the whole family, were all young, old, women and children. Maybe most of them were at fault and innocent people were not punished. I feel that what was written here was a bit too much. You may say that you have argued that the killing was correct, so you can write some details and help those who did not make any mistakes to escape. All in all, I feel that the details are not written well enough. If I add some human touch, I feel that the book will be better and more readable. It is also pretty good-looking in large letters. It is not a loss to invest in it.

I really couldn't bear it. The whole book was full of tears. He was eating his companions and had to block the damage even though he lost his memory. I really burst into tears when I saw it. The only one I cried was Xuan Jue. Why is he so innocent and pitiful? His wooden comb hasn't been given away yet.

Damn it, this book is really incredible and beautiful. Come and read this. Really, this is the only two best-looking novels I have ever read among cultivating immortals. Although it is a new book, the author's writing style is super good, and it is also very beautiful. The content is new and attractive, so people came to read it. It is so beautiful that I stayed up late to read it. The author must update more. I really like this book

After reading this book, my first feeling is that it is more like a light and happy book, but it is mainly sad. Most of the plots are very sad. Only certain plots or certain characters inserted in it are funny. And the writing at the beginning is relatively good, but as you go to the back, the author writes more concisely. Well, at the end, the writing is more rushed? It can be seen that there is a general framework, but not enough flesh and blood has been injected, and there are not enough details. This has led to some plots being strange and abrupt, as if they appeared suddenly, but if you think about it carefully, you will find that the logic behind it makes sense. For example, the CP between them appeared inexplicably, there was an emotional scene that appeared inexplicably, and the heroine was inexplicably shy. But overall it's good

It's really beautiful, but I cut it into a piece of water (fruit) in front of me.

The characters are full-bodied and the heroine is also very heartwarming

The innocent demon king is too weak, but he's pretty good [face-covering][face-covering]

I see that this article is purely out of stock and has relatively few chapters. Now that I see it, I feel that the female protagonist is very upright. We must have people like this in real life. I see that the current trend is probably towards the growth of female protagonists. I really like the female protagonist in it.

What a pity🥹Zixuan is offline

It's very interesting. Lin Yao's plot line is really great.