Master, Won't You Give My Senior Brother Back to Me?

Dear Xuan, it's like seeing the words before: You must understand that most of the readers of this book are readers who like harems, sexual orientation, jockeys defy their ancestors, brothers and sisters, and masters and apprentices. Knotted wings are like a cuckold. I really can't accept such a point. The harem party dislikes Lily, and the Lily party doesn't like having a male protagonist. They really hate each other. Brother Wangxuan, don't let down your younger brother's expectations [shy][shy][shy]

The emotional actions and detailed descriptions are very good. It can be said to be a science fiction film. There is no knife yet. The more worthy point to complain about is: it gives me a feeling of insisting on writing Shura Field. After all, the background is a fantasy novel of cultivation. There can be multiple women. There is no need to choose more than one. Moreover, the relationship between the junior sister and the master is very good. I think the junior sister should not be opposed to the master, nor should they be jealous of each other or the junior sister should be the loser. The two of them should have the same relationship as sisters and are compatible. The witch is understandable. Secondly, there is no need for the male protagonist to coax this and that. He feels like a scumbag, and there may even be multiple-choice questions (it's okay if it's less, the key is all multiple-choice questions). You can choose fraternity. After all, it's a fairy tale. Finally, I just hope that there will be no more female protagonists. Three or more Wen will be enough, and adding it will be boring. Everyone has their own heroine in their mind. If there are more scenes, there will be less scenes. I'm not sure if I can continue to watch it. If I add 150 chapters, the ending will be perfect. If there are more chapters, it will be a bit watery. Finally, I don't like tragedies. There are no tragedies at the moment. I just don't know whether the heroine will accept them all or choose. At present, it seems that I will accept them all. Summary: The best choice for sweet stories for men, not embarrassing, the heroine is sweet and soft, there is no ambiguous and disgusting plot, there is no family recall and the bloody plot of having to say goodbye and then climb the tower to become stronger (currently), there is no tragedy in the whole process, there are many emotional dramas, the heroine is very clear, there is no ambiguous partner (meaning only flirting but not accepting), the male protagonist is pseudo-invincible, goes in both directions, the plot is not draggy, it starts to become sweet in chapter 20, and it is not greasy, it is worth watching. Children's Gate, don't worry, read it, no knife, pure and refreshing, the worries of the three heroines above should be basically gone, I won't say more, the author will update soon @[smile]

It's pretty good. The master and junior sister are portrayed very vividly. The master is cute and the junior sister is arrogant. The rating should be deliberately lowered. However, the author has a shortcoming that it is too everyday. After all, it is a fairy tale and does not give readers the general environment of the whole world (the author talks about nine heavens and ten places). It may be good in the short term, but in the long run, it may follow the vicious cycle of writing one novel after another. Try not to focus on a few people, otherwise it may lead to boredom and withdrawal. , I suggest the author read the book "Senior Sister Never Has a Scandal". Only that kind of comprehensive writing method can become popular (don't criticize if you don't like it) (you are right if you ask)

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

So far, the viewing experience is quite good. The heroine is vividly portrayed, with a naturally silly master who contrasts with cuteness, a cool and arrogant junior sister who brings lily at the beginning, and the witch senior sister who breaks out halfway [learned]. There are also some interesting supporting characters that add to the atmosphere. Generally speaking, the master's scenes are the sweetest and the best to watch [laughter]. Secondly, in my opinion, the senior sisters are more likable than the junior sister. The author writes that the junior sister's emotional description of the protagonist is vague. The most important part is that when the protagonist is going through the tribulation, the little junior sister's incredible actions are really difficult to break [facepalm], and I guess some of the audience will have to be dissuaded. Generally speaking, the author's book writing style is more female-oriented. Most of the plots are more emotional and daily, and the main plot probably accounts for less than one-fifth of the book. Let's take a look at the author's subsequent treatment of the little junior sister's darkening. Those who like to watch more heroines and daily romances can watch it. Those who like to watch more about cultivating immortals can already quit [learned]

To sum up, in the early stage, it seemed that the relationship line of the little junior sister might be very fast, which made people confused. But when the master came out, it suddenly became clear. It turned out that the little junior sister was used to flirt with the master and the protagonist. In front of the master, the little junior sister was like the clown meeting Batman, the devil. The female protagonist and the junior sister together are not the master's enemy, but the protagonist's rank is too high. Being sandwiched between several girls is like an old man playing with a naughty boy [angry]. When the female protagonists are still struggling, it feels that the male protagonist has already decided who the first wife, the second wife, and the third wife are [thinking] [what] [awkward laugh]

The few girls in Tomato are vividly described. It is no longer the kind of text that ends with a plain text description, but the heroine's language, actions, and expressions are all in line with her character description, which is good.

It's very interesting. Currently, the junior sister has an unrequited love for the master, and the master is stupidly in love with the protagonist. The single female lead, Master, is good-looking. It would have been nice to have a Song Dynasty, but then there was Qi... I couldn't stand it anymore. It's enough to have a Master in the setting. I had to forcefully add two of them. No wonder the rating is low.

How shameless! What we want is to take it all. How do you choose, Master, Senior Sister, and Junior Sister? Come on, only children make choices, of course we want them all! The story is smooth, the emotional scenes are quite good, the rhythm is well controlled, and basically every character has his or her own characteristics. The writing style is mainly relaxed and joyful, mixed with some delicate descriptions, which really attracted me. As for the plot, in terms of emotional scenes, the protagonist does not disappear when he should appear, and he does not pretend to be deaf or dumb when he should speak, nor is he pretentious. As for the main plot, I felt it was quite smooth, not sluggish, and didn't have any bad points. Anyway, I like it, so I won't say more, and I give you five stars [I learned it]

Believe me, it's really sweet and good-looking. If you don't look good, come to me and I'll scold you. To be more serious, the psychology and personality of the characters are well described, and the setting is also good. It is not the kind of rigid control of the story line, but a very natural description, as if it is a real world running on its own.