Transformed into a Catgirl Loli, Bought by a Loli-Con from the Start

Ahem, as a gentleman, bah! As a good Chinese man. I think this book is pretty good, at least I think it is. Um! Never mind! I'm a perverted lolicon! ! ! I want to see more! ! ! The author will give me more updates! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]

After reading the ending, it was very sweet and beautiful. The person who liked the most in the book was not the male and female protagonists, but Xiaolan. The male protagonist gave a lot of physical support while Xiaolan gave only emotional support. It can be said that the heroine's success in getting to the end was all thanks to Xiaolan. Every time the heroine encounters setbacks and inner conflicts, it is Xiaolan who saves her. Xiaolan's appearance in the later stage always brings me more security than the male protagonist. Every word makes me feel that the female protagonist will be fine. After watching the ending, I even felt that Xiaolan was more suitable to be the heroine's lover than the male protagonist.

I don't know why, but this book has a particularly strong sense of immersion. It may be inseparable from the author's perfect portrayal of the protagonist. The heroine's resistance to becoming a wife after changing from a boy to a little lolita, as well as the fear of being punished by the hero every time, the uneasiness caused by being stared at too much and being bullied, made me empathize very much. Even every time when a cat is about to be punished, I shudder when I read about the cat's fearful behavior, and a strong sense of uneasiness and fear shoots from the perineum to the sky. This feeling is amazing and indescribable. This is the first time I feel this way while reading a novel.

Although this book has a label of daily life, and it can use less narrative to advance some of the main characters, but I personally feel that even so, the author is still a bit procrastinating. In my opinion, the current main line of this book is that Maomao wants to untie the knot of being bullied by Claire in the past, and overcome that he loves Claire but cannot face his feelings for Claire because of the knot in his heart. When the author started writing this main plot, he did not make steady progress. He often moved to other daily plots in some abrupt ways, which made me feel bad personally. Maomao has always shown an attitude of shrinking back and not daring to look directly, and he is unwilling to be honest with Claire. Gong, if you are far away and now close, the emotional main line is advancing one by one, which really makes me uncomfortable. I hope that if the author wants to write and advance the main line, he can write as smoothly as possible and not forcefully ignore the main line. It doesn't matter if there are fewer words. It can also be a good book with fewer words, right? If things change in the future, I will give it a five-star rating. Thank you, the author [laughs] Came as promised~

Although I want to wait until you finish writing before commenting, I think it's better to comment now. I think the overall evaluation of this book is very good, but why is it not perfect? Please look down First of all, regarding the plot of the entire book, to be honest, the subject matter of this book is a bit old, that is, a boy turning into a girl, whether it is turning into a lolita, a cat girl, or a non-human being, it is already relatively old. However, there are many interesting descriptions in the plot, which is still very good. The description of the plot is not bad, but the subject matter is a bit poor. In terms of character creation, the protagonist, that is, the heroine, is very well-characterized, but the male protagonist is not so well-formed. If I write later, I can highlight some more examples of his image. Your appearance description is more prominent, but it is basically only used in the creation of the protagonist. Although it is said that the cuteness of the protagonist is vividly described, it can also be transferred to other characters, and then there are language descriptions and action descriptions. However, your description of the environment is very small. Although it cannot be said that there is none, it is very small. In other words, you have written it in places where it must appear. Sometimes the description of the environment can also highlight a person's emotions, so there can be less action descriptions and the like. In fact, the best evaluation of this book is Akira's Coal Edition, and judging from the various vocabulary in it, the author must have been in the dark room at least several times, and has a certain degree of skills. Otherwise, there is no way to replace it with this kind of thing. The above is my evaluation, ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ Ahaha, a very awesome book, yes, but the ending is a bit too bland. Although I have reviewed it, my current review is my overall review after reading this book. First of all, the subject matter of this book is not old. Although it is a male-to-female story, the subject matter of this book is still new in the later period, and the character framework and content have been greatly improved, but there is no chaos. In terms of content, your article seems to be full and not compact, which is very good. As for the description method, I think it's actually okay. Although there is still not that much description of the environment, the writing style of your article is still not bad. You have already filled it with action description, psychological description, facial expression description, appearance description and language description, but you don't really use it very much. And you are finished now. It is useless for me to say anything more. Finally, there is the character image. I can say that this character image is very awesome. Whether it is the protagonist or the heroine, their character images are full of both negative and positive. In terms of language, they are round characters with a section in the middle. I can really say that this book is not just about Akira. He has the emotions and depth of the characters in it, which can be said to be very powerful. When it comes to writing about famine, the author is extremely proficient. He can even perform a song for you, and he is very, very capable. The above is my comment, okay (⑉°з°)-♡

It's super good, I recommend watching it at night because you can't keep your mouth shut, and the laughter can kill your annoying neighbors.

Walk slowly! Cats are really cute! It's definitely not a loss after watching it, but the daily update time is too bad... I get stuck every day and update in the early morning [smile]

Ten or even nine points for good looks, friends, don't be blinded by the ratings...

Take the Chinese and set it with gold, take the glass of Liyue and throw it away as a king. This is Zhongli... I digress, I really like [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

This book is very detailed in terms of details, and the plot is also in line with my taste. The only shortcoming is. The author, Ka Wen Ka is so good (｡ӧ◡ӧ｡), I want to watch the teacher [smile][smile][smile][smile]