Pokemon Generations

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author will absorb other people's opinions and make revisions. The writing style is gradually improving. The character of the protagonist is very similar to Xiaozhi, very simple. The excitement of the plot is also constantly improving. Let's talk about shortcomings. Although the writing style is gradually improving, there are still some shortcomings. In the early stage, the plot was biased towards plain water, and it felt like it was a pity to throw away the food. However, in the middle stage of the Padia chapter, the plot is relatively interesting, and the writing of the characters has gradually improved. All in all, it is a debut novel by a novice author and deserves encouragement. (Meaning that if you buy shares now, you are an original fan!)

The writing in the first twenty chapters is not good, and there are too many characters, which makes the reading a bit scattered. In the later period, many lines gradually converged, and the look and feel became much better. The protagonist's character may seem a bit dull in the early stage, but in the later stage, he is indeed the kind of Sigma man who is equal to all beings, a pure trainer, and has a really good relationship with Pokémon. He must stick to it until the end.