Eerie Invasion: My Celestial Master’s Mansion Is Finally Open for Business

The book is quite nice. Too little. I usually skip those side stories. How to say this. The side stories kept me reading carefully until the end. Very well written. It's the type of novel I want to write myself. A love that can sing and cry. It is comparable to the story of The Little Matchmaker, a Fox Demon. The author is a copy subject. There are more possibilities too. I hope the author can use this knife not only for love. Later, we can also use family affection, brotherhood, kindness of strangers, etc. If only the first article could be as perfect as this. I personally feel that it is already a masterpiece among the weird dungeons that will be famous all over the world. However, the protagonist is in too much trouble now. If the dungeon cannot be carried out normally in the future, the story may not be convenient to develop. Forcibly improving the strength will definitely become boring. However, I seem to see that the protagonist intends to transfer the locked mark of the dungeon controller? If that's the case this is a good idea.

Beautiful! Beautiful! Everyone, come and see [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Since girls write less about weird genres, I won't give low marks. First of all, weird genres are generally read by more boys, so relatively speaking, girls tend to think in a way that they don't dare to write about horror. This shows an effect. They are both fun-loving and fun-loving, and their thinking has strayed in the wrong direction. At the same time, some people are unreasonable and add the mythical Ten Palaces of Hell and evil gods like Cthulhu to the world view. Overall, the thinking framework is still very good, but there are also shortcomings. First of all, the combat power collapses. Bad, this affects the reading experience very much. It directly benchmarks the combat power of the SSS at first, and then simply introduces new levels, which feels very confusing. Secondly, the characters appear in the wrong order. In order to suppress the strength of the protagonist, the strength of other worlds is added. In the world with more than 400, the strong ones can reach the strength of the game administrator Wheel King through sacrifice. So have you considered how to write the more than 400 worlds in advance? This kind of writing method will most likely collapse later on, giving the impression that the overall novel framework has not yet been established and the novel is being thought of one by one. Also, the protagonist's strength is completely unstable and there is no accurate division. It's like the protagonist has to become stronger collectively and force a 50-50 split. This book is actually half-finished at this point. It is recommended that you consider the overall framework first before re-opening a new book. If possible, please give some better suggestions in the comments. If we say that according to the normal framework, it is reasonable that the Wheel King should appear in the middle and late stages. It is reasonable that the strength of the evil gods sacrificed in pain is lower than that of the Wheel King. Finally, the protagonist should be able to conquer the Hundred Ghosts through intelligence and strength. This will be the beginning of a good book. You can think of a special extra chapter to plan the Hundred Ghosts in the Hundred Ghosts Picture. The copy is being adjusted, and more than a thousand chapters will not be a problem at all.

Personally, I think it's okay, it would be nice if those skills were permanent. It's also possible that there aren't many books to read, and it feels very novel [grievance]

Very nice, five-star praise [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I'm sure, if it's not the kind of cool novel I like to read, then this book will only suffer from the author's storyline and writing style. Come on, author, this book should have a guaranteed rating of 8.0

It's not bad, but I'm afraid it will end badly.

It's good-looking. Let's just say that he really has a few tricks up his sleeve.

It looks good. You must see it.

Forget it, it's not easy for an author to write a book