Grand Wizard

It's a very good wizard article, not the old routine of chip system flow. Anyway, I don't have any logical flaws after reading it. I just want to ask if the talent can be described in a more standardized and detailed way, and why the talent is based on the illusion system.

Slow heat flow, quite nice However, if the author wants to be seen by more people, it is still recommended to change the cover and name. The current mainstream is fast-paced, and there are few people who like slow reading, so it is more important to catch people's attention and make people notice it at a glance. You can take a look at the titles of popular books on the market, such as 749 Games, which are more eye-catching, as are the covers, and the title can be changed back after a certain number of viewers. Furthermore, you can revise the first few chapters. Some sentences have unclear meanings or do not make sense. Now that the chapters have reached hundreds of chapters, great progress has been made in this area. You can revise the first few chapters, otherwise many people will abandon the book because of the first few chapters.

The protagonist is a capitalist, an old devil, and a wizard, who can still use his brain, which is great, and the setting is very rigorous. I just like the kind of people who forget to set up, but every time the author writes about setting or plot issues, he will specifically highlight them, just like Ness.

The writing is very beautiful. The author must persist and never give up on this book. Like wizard novels, you are one of the few good-looking books written by you. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

The family story is very well written. The protagonist has been fighting since the beginning, which suits my taste very well. Even the cultivation is skipped, it is simply the divine book of my dreams. Help the family build territory and recruit younger brothers. Really good.

The protagonist of this book is not a time traveler, but a local genius. This book can be said to be a classic and traditional Western fantasy novel system. There may be some minor problems with the protagonist's character and world background, and I can't tell, but there are absolutely no logical problems or bloody plots. Moreover, the author's writing skills are good and his writing style is somewhat rigorous, a bit like a Western autobiographical novel. Because of my experience reading Tomato novels for so long, this book is indeed pretty good and has the potential to become a million-dollar novel. Let me give you a like [like][like][like][like]

I have read more than 30 chapters so far: Advantages 1. There is no useless counterattack, a messy plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, and the opponent is good 2 The protagonist is a native, the son of a baron, a genius, and gets a lot of help from his family 3The author's settings are good and innovative, such as the Virtue Knight Flaws: I am a newbie author, and my writing skills still have room for improvement. I heard that they will be much better in the future. Summary: This is an above-average book, worth reading. I look forward to it being a big hit. Good luck to the author [Like]

The structure of the novel is novel, and the advancement is not sloppy. Compared with the ones on the list, the ancient plot is much better to read, the world view is large enough, and the characters are quite distinctive. It is not a mindless novel, and it feels much better to read.

I am a deep fan of the wizard genre. This novel draws on the writing methods of the traditional wizard genre, but goes out of its own framework. It is still a little bit toxic at the beginning, but it gets better and better as it gets written later. I am an old school, but this novel is very innovative and the author's personalization is well written. One update a day is too slow. Can the author not take a break [laughs] The author ran away [smile]

I quite enjoyed watching it. There are flaws, but I don't care too much. It depends on you guys. The protagonist is very decisive in killing, and he got demon blood in the early world.