Grand Wizard

This is a very good wizarding novel. It's not one of those old-fashioned chip system stories. I haven't encountered any major logical flaws so far. I just wanted to ask if the descriptions of talents could be more standardized and detailed, and why the talents lean towards illusion.

It's a slow-burn story, quite enjoyable, but if the author wants it to reach a wider audience, I suggest changing the cover and title. The current trend is fast-paced, and those who prefer slow-burn stories are fewer, so it's crucial to grab attention and make it immediately noticeable.

The protagonist is a capitalist, an old devil, and also a wizard—the kind who uses his brain, which is great. The premise is very well-developed; I'm the kind of person who pays close attention to the details. But the author always makes a point of highlighting any issues with the setting or plot, which is really nice.

It's very well written! Author, please keep going and don't give up on this book. Like many wizarding novels, it's one of the few well-written ones I've ever read. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

The family-themed story is fantastic. The protagonist is constantly fighting from the very beginning, which is totally my cup of tea. Even cultivation is barely mentioned; it's practically the kind of divine book I've always dreamed of. Helping the family conquer territory and recruit followers—it's really great.

The protagonist of this book isn't a time traveler; he's a local genius. This book fits the classic and traditional Western fantasy novel mold. There might be a few minor issues with the protagonist's personality and the world-building, which I can't quite pinpoint, but there are absolutely no logical problems or melodramatic plot points.

I've read over 30 chapters so far: Advantages: 1. No stale underdog triumphs or ridiculous face-slapping tropes; the protagonist treats his subordinates well. 2. The protagonist is a native, the son of a baron, considered a genius, and receives a lot of help from his family. 3. The author's settings are good and original, such as the Virtuous Knight concept.

The novel boasts a fresh structure, and the progressions are executed flawlessly, making it far more engaging than the older, more predictable stories on the list. It offers a large enough world-building, and the characters are all well-developed and memorable. It's not a mindless wish-fulfillment novel, making it a much more enjoyable read.

I'm a huge fan of the wizarding genre, and this novel borrows from traditional wizarding writing styles but also breaks out of its own mold. It had a few minor flaws at the beginning, but it gets better and better as it goes on. I'm a traditionalist, but this book is very innovative and the author's personal style is excellent. One update a day is too slow; can the author please not take breaks? 😄 The author has disappeared. 🙂

I quite enjoyed reading it. It has some flaws, but I don't mind them too much. It's up to you guys. The protagonist is quite decisive and ruthless, and he obtained demon bloodline early in the story.