From Mountain Foraging to Solving Cases, I Became Everyone’s Favorite

I've read part of it. Let's not talk about the punctuation issues. At least I know what it means. Let's talk about the other male protagonist. The score is not high. Logically speaking, whether it is a cp or a heartthrob, I found that most of them are about 9 points. It just feels like your emotional line in the early stage is a bit stiff, and it feels so awkward that it doesn't feel like a CP. The lack of it is probably a problem with the creation of the male protagonist in the early stage. It's a bit common to portray the male protagonist as confident and quite childish, but I also noticed that you said that he is a growth-oriented male protagonist, so that's fine and true, he is only 19 years old after all. From the article, we can actually see that the male protagonist is also capable, but because the male protagonist is more powerful, I feel that he is a bit unworthy. I can understand this, and love can make up for it. But this. Is the brain circuit normal? Let's not talk about whether they are together or not. Just ask him what else his position is, and just say that the male lead is his. Ah? My eyes have been opened, but for now, I can still see. Let me take a look again. I want to see what it grows into in the end. It's not easy to create, but it's easy to get started with four stars. I will change it later if I feel good about it.

The writing is okay. It should have been typed by hand or not checked after writing. There are some problems with punctuation, which affects reading a bit, but the overall problem is not big. There are two male protagonists. The attack type is growth type. According to the later stage of the plot, it should become stronger, but the force value should be stronger. After all, the introduction mentioned at the beginning that the force value of the attack is off the charts, so those who can't accept it should not just look for presence. Disgusting people [smile] There are so many books on Tomato, there is no need to hold on to a book. The author can write whatever he wants, as long as the logic is ok Generally speaking, novels have an outline. If you directly say in the comment area that you can't accept the attack, you won't listen to the author's explanation, and the screen will be blocked. Have you ever considered the workload of forcibly changing the outline, and the issue of whether it will collapse after changing the outline? The requirements for free novels are so high, why not switch to paid software? Did you give a large gift? There are so many demands and you still have to swipe the screen? Dear author, come on, it's very good now. It would be even better if you could add n chapters a day [laughing]

It's very nice to watch. I like the interaction between Xiaobai and the animals. I like Hubao very much! Feng Ye fell in love with Xiao Bai at first sight, and Xiao Bai fell in love with him while getting along, which is worth watching. Animals are little angels! ! !

Although I have been mentally prepared for a long time But after watching it for so long, Hua Bao and Xiao Bai were the ones who supported me to continue watching. When I looked through the catalog and saw "Together", I really cried to death I finally understand how it feels to be a fan in the entertainment industry Alas The two male protagonists really have no sense of CP. This meal is a bit reluctant... If you don't say anything, I'm going to smoke a cigarette (trembling) To be honest, it might be more popular if you don't take CP and take the all-round mountain climbing route... Well... Forget it Author: As long as the baby is happy (Squat) (Draw circles) Oh my god, I want to cry

Overall it's pretty good, but the author doesn't seem to be good at writing emotional dramas. It's a little weird when the two of them are together, but everything else is fine.

Does the male protagonist have to close his career? ? The anchors are all excited. I think it matches well. I hope it will be updated soon. The male lead will not change. I also hope there will be no other male supporting characters and more interactions with small animals.

Super pretty! The first time I saw it was a story about two male protagonists, oh! Love it even more! !

I just want to say a few words for Feng Ye! He is not as bad as the comment section says! Those who go around saying that he is not good enough for Xiaobai are really outrageous! Childish first! Xiaobai is 22 years old. His sister is younger than Xiaobai. He must be around 20. He is not naive at his age. Does he have to be as mature as the boss who has gone through thousands of sails? His family atmosphere is very happy. He did not have a miserable childhood, a troubled father, a cowardly mother, and a young sister. Is it a problem for a child who grew up in a happy family to be childish? We usually call this kind of sunny and cheerful little puppy! Secondly, Pu Xin! Being ordinary and confident is called Pu Xin! Feng Ye's grandfather stands so tall, how can he be called ordinary? Isn't he confident that a grandson raised by such a powerful family has low self-esteem? What is his identity? His family lives in a compound and has security guards! As long as he doesn't play e-sports, it would be difficult for ordinary people to meet him, right? He can't be confident like this? Finally narcissistic! Xiaobai is handsome and has a powerful family. He can be said to be a member of the princelings. He is neither arrogant or domineering nor bullying others. He has also achieved his own achievements in e-sports. Can't he be narcissistic under such conditions? What Feng Ye said in the live broadcast room did sound like Meng Nan, but we can't deny everything about him! The content of this book is great, but the emotional lines are not handled smoothly enough, so the interaction between the two male protagonists is a bit inconsistent. This is a slight shortcoming of this book! Xiaobai's design is perfect, I like it very much, he is cool and sassy, ​​I feel that Xiaobai is too perfect and impeccable, that's why Fengye's character design seems not so good!

Very, very, very beautiful. The author should update soon. This book is about the life of the protagonist and various animals. He met many big guys, and then the protagonist got interested and chased our little mist. There are a series of stories to come, which I highly recommend.

Nice! ! ! If I only wrote about Baiwu alone, it would be a cool article😗😗😗