Honkai Impact 3Rd: Conquering Myriad Worlds with Conceptual Skills!

Actually, I felt pretty good when I first started Chapter 1-2. Those few skills are enough to play for a while. But how can I put it? Maybe the author likes to write about his favorite world. The order and selection of these worlds are quite poor. After all, the combat power is unknown + time and space chaos + repeated names + no explanation + unknown time. Among the four poisonous points, except for the confusion of time and space and the lack of explanation, three of them are not too uncomfortable for me. But the confusion of time and space and the lack of explanation are really uncomfortable. It feels like my head is in knots. There is no difference between you walking a little bit in each world and not walking at all. Do you read the novel to remember the progress of those worlds at the same time? The plot of Esta can actually be written very beautifully, and it can be passed casually in one go, without caring about whether it is a bit naive or not. Lingling is the same, abandoning the city and leaving it to a little girl. Even though I don't understand the specific content of that worldview, but this kind of behavior is similar to leaving it alone and letting it go. For a child whose values ​​are still growing, without anyone's guidance, isn't it a bit too much? And save a life = I entrust the child to you? It's more like save a life = If you don't give me the child, I will kill your whole family. I really can't understand this plot Also, for me personally, the world of Lingling and Hydrogen is still too niche. There are no combat power hints or plot explanations. I just start it and finish it without knowing what the plot is like, whether it is good or bad, who was killed, what the consequences were, and what the impact was. I am completely confused. This kind of plot is really bad. Alas, it can actually be written very well. The setting content is good, the feeling is refreshing, and the characters are fresh. However, when written, it feels chaotic. It feels like a super cake with all kinds of grilled lobsters, crabs, and delicacies added. It's hard to describe it in one sentence. I'm giving it two stars because I like the setting, but I'm giving it separately because the writing is really bad and there are too many young girls coming out of the factory, right? By the way, the author said before that he should not criticize him for having too many female protagonists, but where do you have so many female protagonists? It can only be said that it is very punishing, and the protagonist is as indifferent as if he has x-dysfunction. Where do you have so many female protagonists? He is obviously an arrogant man + a semi-antisocial personality + Si Fei Zai Zhen Xia Die. Like other Xiao Bai Wen, he has strong strength but not a strong heart and character. But don't worry, I probably won't be able to write the ending. This kind of chaotic plot is really Nan Bang. If anyone else had written it, it would have cost you 400+.

Chaos, if it's just that there are too many worlds, it's okay, but the author likes to jump around multiple worlds in a short period of time, and even go to the next world before finishing the things in the original world. Very chaotic, often in one world thinking about things in another world, talking about things in another world, and jumping between worlds randomly. For example: I went back in time to find little Esta, and on the way I went to a certain world of Yue Fei, and brought Yue Fei to the world of the divine eagle, and then came back to continue to accompany Esta, and then I went to the Seer to dig gold mines and ran to the French world to exchange money, and then I went to find Leng Lingling to do something. I can't understand it anyway.

Let me tell you a little bit about my opinion. Don't say that I'm just finding fault. [Learned] I saw you said in the comment area that the revision was slowing down later on. Please try your best to polish the previous chapters. Don't treat each chapter one world at a time. Try to revise it as much as possible while there are not many chapters now. Otherwise, a lot of readers would probably be lost because the pace is always too fast. There are also chat groups that you can invite randomly (you are the author, and inviting people randomly is just for fun). You should have read novels about chat groups, and you can actually learn from them. In the early stage, I relied too much on spells, and the mask and magic energy were completely useless. Doesn't this mean that the mask and magic energy were not used? Your own abilities are not developed deeply. Relying too much on spells is a small disadvantage. It is impossible to develop without time, because you can travel to the past time to practice, and then return to reality after practicing (or you have considered this problem, but forgot to patch it) Finally, the fan group account sent me

It's too fast. I can't keep up with the shuttle speed. I almost feel like a "courier", the kind who runs wherever there is no traffic, but it's still pretty good-looking. Just don't be too nonsensical. Otherwise, I feel like I don't really want to watch it.

One thing I don't understand about Beng Tiewen is why it must be researched by the Black Tower? And it seems that Black Tower doesn't have a particularly good relationship with the protagonist, so he studies it for her.

Just give a brief review Advantages: Dream series, changing the bad ending Disadvantages: The protagonist's behavioral logic is young, he takes things without telling him, and the negotiation with Roger is not well written (in the author's words, it can actually be reflected in the dialogue between Roger and Justin webmaster). It has a feeling of fast travel in the early days. There is no logic in traveling at will. The most important thing is that this is the protagonist's independent choice and there is no one to take the blame for (for example, random travel is done by Aha). The protagonist does not have a formed ability system (I have never seen the elf system if I want to practice it, and the elf weapons are also secondary designs), including but not limited to long-range and melee physical spells, etc. A lot of things that could be written have been mentioned in one stroke. If the protagonist just goes to get the mask and does not participate in the plot, then don't let the protagonist travel through time, but instead go fishing or open a small door to get it, otherwise it will ruin the look and feel (there is a gun in the first act, and it must go off in the third act) (unless the protagonist is set to run away)

The protagonist has the ability to travel through time, but it turns out that it is not the culmination of time but just a clone of the past... There are countless ways to become invincible, but he turns himself into an elf. The heroine is turned into an elf for no reason, but he just ignores it. She even has no interest in the protagonist at all...

The characters are scattered all over the place and the plot is super confusing. There are also some characters that you meet once, give them strength and then leave, leaving almost no time to get along with them. How much will they like the protagonist? Time will completely change a person, let alone children.

It involves time but there is no uniqueness, emmm, so it is easy for him to fall in love with you in the future, and the timeline is indeed a subject where nothing has happened, which is similar to the sacred timeline of Marvel. Everything starts from this, and the future will not be interfered with, but other timelines will be generated in the future. I think a lot (just random thoughts) and I can't stand this, so I left a 4 star for encouragement and ran away.

Let's give it five stars. It's a hodgepodge, but it's a bit messy. There isn't a clear main line. The more you write about it, the easier it will fall apart.