Kevin in This Collapsing Era

The writing is decent. It is not a system harem story covered in Honkai Impact. It has its own goals and actions to achieve it. Strictly speaking, this is indeed a more honest Honkai fan story. There are not many plots based on Honkai characters at the moment.

The protagonist's personality growth process is very good. From an ordinary person to an Otto-like Kevin with a little bit of Alley, it is very ordinary [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. There are no problems so far, and the characters are not OOC. I hope the author can cheer up💪[send heart][send heart][send heart].

A masterpiece! I really like Kevin in it, I like every single one of them. The ancestor is not too OOC. The scene where Kevin Kaslana transforms back into a larvae was so sweet that my heart almost melted. Also, this strange mixture of feelings is really funny.

It's well done in the fanfic, I haven't read much of it, time goes by relatively quickly, and the plot is relatively compact, but maybe too much plot will feel a bit boring? Maybe it's because I haven't read much. Apart from anything else, the writing is very good. You can see the author's efforts to describe a real world and narrate it, but it is a bit slow (I haven't read much). To be honest, it is a bit tiring. After all, it is very tiring to describe and understand everything. A world, as a writer The author is very capable. Maybe I don't know much about this way of writing, but it is very true. It infected me and I abandoned my own ideas and chose to substitute. I am not qualified to comment on my hard work, so the above can be ignored. In short, come on, in the fast food style life, this kind of spirit of being able to give up the faster pace is very valuable, come on

The growth of the protagonist is visible to the naked eye, which also makes up for many regrets of the original plot. The description of emotions is not too stuffy or too dull. Various challenges to interpersonal relationships can also give a glimpse of the fun of the original characters in their daily interactions. It's just that I couldn't stand the way I dealt with an enemy (I retreated anyway). To sum up, it would be 9.5 Points (if you don't feel that the handling method is inappropriate, it would be 9.7 Points)

It is a very interesting book (although I think 4 and a half stars is more appropriate). Of course, the premise is that you can read the inappropriate change in the early part. Although in the final analysis, you want it all but it is not handled well (I have never seen it handled well, and even if I think it is not satisfactory, others will find faults, so there is no explanation), and there are a lot more typos and omissions in the book than other books. However, I prefer the views on different organizations and individuals in the book. Human nature is complex and three-dimensional. We cannot directly evaluate its black and white, but determine whether we accept its practices and results in different aspects. The same is true for reading books. So far, I think only the early stages of the book are considered poisonous points, but compared to other books that also write about taking everything in the second collapse, it is actually enough. As for the ones that are not consistent with the original work, I suggest you read the plot a few times (it is exactly the same as the original work, right?), And read the fanfic just for different plots, or write one yourself and read it. And what Otto is bragging about is actually because Otto has so many positive expressions in the book (if the gender were changed, they would call for a harem). In summary, it was actually surprisingly good. Seeing that there were so few comments, I thought it was very bad.

It looks good, except for a few typos, and there are nothing wrong with it. And I'm quite curious about how the author will write the subsequent plot? If you can make a full circle while sitting, I think this perfect score must be straight.

I just want to rate it a little low. To be honest, apart from some problems with the writing style, this novel has no problems with its general logic. It still feels very good.

Not bad, very good, very to my liking. I hope the author will not stop updating [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] (Please) [almost crying]

I don't know what those people who wrote negative reviews are thinking. Anyway, I think he is very good because he makes me feel real. Although there are a lot of typos, he is very interesting, so overall he is very good.