Honkai: Star Rail: I'm a Garbage-Picking Prodigy

Although the writing style is a bit immature as the author said, there was an inexplicable attraction that attracted me to read on. Compared with those fanfics with systematic texts, the quality of this book is really high, and five stars is not low at all. I hope the author can continue writing [love] [love] [love]

What is certain is that the author's writing is very novel and always has an unclear and powerful feeling, and the foundation of the novel's plot is as solid as a rock, without any casual or superficial feeling. You can write new ideas in current novels Okay, next, I will talk about the shortcomings that I personally think. Hmm... I'm just talking casually, don't take it too seriously. After all, this is just my personal unfounded judgment and it has no authority at all. If it doesn't work, just think I'm talking nonsense. First of all, although the author's words and sentences are very novel and sacred, on the other hand, the overall story is too riddle-like, the writing is foggy, and the main line is not obvious. Although it is mentioned, it is relatively vague. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt a little confused. Many places described the setting, and the progress was not very natural. I had no idea what it was talking about. Secondly, it is not closely related to the game plot. As a fan fiction, I believe that there should be both "sameness" to the content of the original work and "difference" that is unique to the novel itself. And this one is too unique, which makes it not a strong fan novel for me. Finally, the main line is vague. Without setting a precise long-term goal, short-term small goals also do not appear, which cannot allow readers to continuously obtain the satisfaction of achieving goals. Although there is some romance content that makes people interested, I personally think that romance is just a seasoning, and the main plot is the key to truly affecting readers' emotions (and there is no substantial progress in the posts, and they always fall apart after just writing (￣□￣)). There is no short-term goal to hold the readers back. Although they know that the plot is holding back a lot of content, if they hold it back for too long, the motivation to read will gradually fade away and the reading will become uninteresting.

Personally speaking, the writing is very good. It is a hard-core radio-type humanistic genre, and the audience is still prepared for those players with depth and strong understanding. As for other people, it may be a pleasure to read [what]

This feels the oppression of genius. MiHoYo's confrontation with Hei, Luo, and Ruan is only in the text, and there is no sense of how talented they are, but this novel truly depicts the confrontation between geniuses. The protagonist has a strong sense of oppression and shows his true style After all, MiHoYo just made an invention, and the invention was awesome, and then he didn't write much about it. He didn't write too much about intellectual curiosity, and he felt like he was just a person who was very good at inventing. But this book showed curiosity about knowledge and showed it to the audience. Genius appeared to question, ask questions, and solve problems, and it had a purpose. Unlike there, it was just for invention, and truth for the sake of truth.

There are too many descriptions about the protagonist's race later on, and sometimes less than half of a chapter is described. When reading a novel, I want to read a wonderful story rather than a character setting. Overall it's pretty good.

The author's writing is rigorous and the world view is grand (the new iron world view is already quite grand) and the racial setting is also very good. I hope the author can write better and better, and the articles should be more refined than too many. Come on! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

I was the one in the group who debated a lot of Bengtie's world view with the author, but in the end I found that my own world view was different from that of the author. It was really difficult to convince the other party, but instead put pressure on myself. I empathized with this book. The book is quite interesting, but I can't understand the author's thinking, so I put a star to show my preference.

The original plot truly captures the feeling of the Genius Club, but the repetitive setting instructions are a bit annoying and have little impact. Come on, author.

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The setting is interesting, but there is no war. I thought I could see a battle in heaven.