Honkai: Star Rail: I Really Only Want to Fix the Storyline

There is a strange feeling of reading a book written by a fictional historian, and Ye Ye's book is quite interesting.

Not to mention anything else, just because the author has his own original plot, it deserves to be given five stars. It is very thoughtful. Although I have not read a lot of content, I believe that as long as your book does not have any major poisonous points in the middle and no one maliciously rates it, then it will definitely be rated at 9 points.

Different feeling, different plot, different characters, ah ha, was it you?

This galaxy has room for any possibility

It's really good to read. Today's fan fiction is either frequently interrupted or poorly written. At least I see that this novel is pretty good. I hope this novel won't follow the footsteps of "This Life Is Too Long, My Epitaph Is Too Short".

It still feels great. The setting is novel and the protagonist is very nice. It's not some abstract anti-human thing.

The writing is good and the story is good. The only problem is that it was discovered too early and there is not much to say. I insist that the shortcoming is that the obsession with returning home is not attractive as the ultimate goal. The hook is very open, but the protagonist's development level is less than 10% … It's a pity that it ended so quickly, but the outline is quite interesting

A good idea. If the author can control his writing skills, it will be a masterpiece of light comedy.

The protagonist has become a lot weaker, but it's still very interesting. I recommend updating more often.

A very good book