Star Dome: Raising the Heroines, Their Filial Devotion Turns Twisted!

I still recommend everyone to take a look at it. There are two systems in total, one is the role-playing system, and the other is the simulation system. Then the father has finished playing, and the system has no sense of existence. Now the main promotion is the simulation system, so it does not affect the reading. The plot is very exciting, but I haven't tried it if it is toxic. Come out, it may be that I am invulnerable to all poisons. Also, please don't look at the word "Dad" on it and think that it is centered on Dad and the character of the original protagonist is the main character. Since the role has been completed, Dad's words are secondary, so it is still suitable to read when you are in a book shortage [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Bengtie Simulation Stallion, a fantasy work for otakus, you deserve it

How should I put it? Aside from the setting of Beng Tieyuan, it's still quite good. After all, everyone who watches it is the type who can accept the setting of Beng Tieyuan. How can I say that this book does have a heroine setting? After all, when you specifically describe a certain character or prefer a certain character, you almost become a heroine. There are still some shortcomings, um, some little reverie, the protagonist type can be understood as a time-traveler type of native. In terms of plot, the mirror scene was a bit difficult, and I really couldn't accept it for my character. Then, some of the protagonist's ability settings are not clearly stated, such as whether the spell is bound and whether it will fall, and how magic works. You also said that the first system is simulated twelve times, which means twelve spells. Normally speaking, simulation system types usually do not have novice gift packs and the like. Then, regarding the simulation, it is not necessary to die every time to end the simulation. You can try to increase your subjective consciousness to simulate. Instead of starting from Xiaobai every time. Um, current questions or suggestions? It's been brought up, maybe? "To sum up, using the iron-collapsing background in a simulation is equivalent to collapsing many characters and setting up some private backgrounds. To be honest, reading this book was quite uncomfortable at times. The only pornographic content is just brushed off, which makes it even more uncomfortable. To be honest, there is a book in the "Weird Genre" next door where the author has something to say about the car driving so fast and completely letting yourself go." Finally, your writing style and description of the characters and plots are absolutely fine for writing an enjoyable article. At least it will definitely be much better than this one. If you accept the type I mentioned above, you can come in and take a look. Most of the objective reviews, if you try to criticize me, there's nothing you can do

The plot is quite smooth and the writing is pretty good among Shuangwen. But there is actually another point. Regarding the role of father in the title, there is actually not much written description in the article. Even removing it has no impact. The most important one is the twelve talismans. But because this title naturally identifies two types of people; One, I don't like acting because I think it's too dramatic and I just leave when I see the title. Second, I like to watch cosplay, but because there is very little content in this article, there is even a new system, the core of which is also simulation, so I will also filter out some of them. The title is the first impression, and the introduction is the expansion. Only a suitable title can filter out a fixed group of people. Rather than writing more chapters, I think we should consider this issue first; Is it going to continue to develop in the direction of role-playing, or in the direction of 12 spells and simulations, and the most important thing is the focus of the title.

Author, please tell me what the male protagonist did to Sister Zhou, I am willing to do anything [crying] [crying] Are all gods little dragons? Why is it a woman? The author's language is ambiguous. I really can't tell [crazy]

There's nothing to say about the description of the heroine's emotional drama, but can it be more straightforward? Sorry, I retract my comment. My cousin used his cell phone, sorry [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The reason why few people follow your book is because only those who can survive the first chapter are worthy of following your book.

To be honest, I have seen him since the novel had more than forty chapters, and it was recommended three times. I didn't read it because the name was too deceptive. I didn't read it until I read it in the book shortage. It was more than sixty chapters at that time. From the beginning to now, when I stopped writing, I was really afraid that the author would give up and run away. But later I found out the reason why the author stopped writing, but I kind of hoped that the author would succeed. It didn't matter if he gave up. But now that he is back, I hope the author can keep writing, give this book a good ending, and give an answer to the book friends who have been insisting.

It's better not to persecute Tingyun, I really like the big fox [grievance]

If you are good enough, please write Mingchao next time🤓